arianaSarroyo

Hi there! This was definitely not what I was expecting and I was pleasantly surprised. I liked the whole emphasis on the table and corner of the cafeteria and how ...

This was very inspirational. A pleasant read. However, I do agree with one of the other users. Some of the stanzas seemed long and out-of place. I wouldn't say that ...

How cute! I love the whole idea of the little bee. It is short and sweet. You also utulized some fairly decent literary devices here. I can almost imagine the ...

Whoa. This is haunting, yet innovative and beautiful. It leaves you with feelings of remorse for the girl that everyone treated wrong. Also, the rhyme scheme was realistic and fit ...

Hi there! So to start off, I want to say that I really liked this! The beginning especially hooked me in. You used such lovely figurative language here. The way ...

Hi there! I just wanted to say that I love this poem. It is clean, beautifully written and that, coupled with your wonderful use of figurative language really made the ...

The format of this is crazy, but I feel lime it matched the whole feeling of Writee's Block. Recently, I've been feeling depressed because I don't think my work is ...

Htre. I'm going to try my best to review this. I remember reading the Scarlett Ibis in English this past year. I definitely think that I can relate/connect to this ...

Wow! I'm impressed! I know this sounds cliche, but this was very nice! What I liked about this the most was your impressive range of vocabulary. The manner that you ...

This is very sweet and peaceful like Cailey said. Your words flowed nicely together and you created an image as if to say, "Don't be sad, be glad, be happy ...

Hi there. I'm going to attempt to review this work without addressing anything that was already addressed. You, for the most part used very descriptive language and utulized your similes ...

Hi there. I think you are off to a good start, but I think you can make this better. Try to use some imagery and descriptive language. To evoke images ...

Hi there! I'm kind of lost as to why this has no reviews. But anyway, I'm here and I have to say, I was pleased with what I read. It ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed reading this piece. It was very descriptive, well written and I definitely felt like I could relate to it. I think of most of us ...

Hi there! :) so I'm going to attempt to review this poem. I want to start off by commending you on your use of vocabulary and figurative language. It flowed ...