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  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: Sadness & Goodbye

    Hey there! Ariana with your review. So to start off, I really like this. This was very eloquently written, complete with an array of figurative language such as similies and ...

    Sep 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: You Have Killed Yourselves And Ourselves.

    Hi there! Ariana here with your review. So in order to start off, I must admit: I was impressed! War is a common subject I write about-but this poem spoke ...

    Sep 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Water

    Hi there. Ariana here with your review. So to begin, well done. I really enjoyed reading this. It was very lengthy, but worth the read. I do have a few ...

    Sep 13, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: When I Cry, Chpt. 4

    Hi there and welcome to YWS. To start off, I have to admit that this was a bit of a lengthy read. In addition to that, I don't usually review ...

    Sep 9, 2013
  • Poetry » Satire, Satire Re: How to poetry in bathos

    Hi there. Ariana with your review. So I have to agree with the other reader. The symbolism was not particularly clear. However, that did not make this a "bad' poem. ...

    Sep 9, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Do I Dare?

    Hi there. Ariana with your review. So, to start off, I have to agree with the reviewers below me. I was quite fond of the recurring "do I dare". I ...

    Sep 9, 2013
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Lady of the Mists

    Hi there. Ariana with your review. Now to start off, I think you did a great job here. Your title lured me and the subject matter was quite interesting. I ...

    Sep 9, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: Chapter 8 of The Unchosen Ones

    Hi there. Much like the reviewer below me, I have never read any part of this novel. So perhaps I will read your previous works at a later time. Anyway, ...

    Sep 6, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: God took you from me

    Hi there! Ariana with your review. Well to start off, I am sorry for your loss. :-( However I do have to applaud you for being able to cope with ...

    Sep 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Poem on writing

    Hey there. I want to start off by commending you on your swift rhythm you used here. Everything flowed together and it was a fairly enjoyable read. However, there were ...

    Sep 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Like a flower

    Hey there! I must open this review by saying nice work. Your comparisons here are splendid. You did a very nice job describing what a friend was truly like. I ...

    Sep 1, 2013
  • » Re: Is It a Dream? Chapter 2 More Confusion

    Hi there. Ariana with your review. So to start off, I think this was a great chapter. The dialogue flowed well and it was easy to understand. I have not ...

    Sep 1, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: At My Sister's

    Hey there! Ariana with your review. I'll start off by saying that I don't usually review short stories, but yours was intriguing to me. As I read it, I had ...

    Sep 1, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Hold the Wind

    Hi there. Ariana with your review. This is a very beautiful poem. There wrere parts of it that were a bit confusing, but overall, this was beautiful. I was really ...

    Sep 1, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: thirst

    Hello. :-) I must say I really liked this. This was very well written, as well as being a somewhat interesting poem to read. It was very nicely formatted in ...

    Sep 1, 2013


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