ariah347

Hey there! First off, this was a cozy read with the spooky season upon us! However, today in Ohio, the weather pretended to have a summer complex. :| I'll be ...

Hey there! First off, as a crime junkie, this immediately got my attention!! So kudos to that! I am not always easily intrigued and at 100, but this had me ...

Hey there! First, this brought me right into a horror film just through how it is written, so bravo! I enjoyed the sentence: "It is born from the deepest, darkest ...

Hey there! First off, I love reviewing poetry and usually review/comment per stanza so I'll be doing that. Before I start, I'm curious about the title. I'm not familiar with ...

Hey there! First off, I hope you're doing well wherever you are in the world. This makes me wonder if the narrator's father has passed, trying not to assume it's ...

Hey there! First off, I am unfamiliar with prose poetry, so you taught me something! Second, I love your avatar. Our names start with the same letter :D On to ...

Hey there! First off! I love your avatar and this gives me Alice in Wonderland vibes, which is my absolute favorite ever LOL :D Okay, on to my points: 1) ...

Hey there! First off, I feel like this is a song or could be! The comparison between coffee and whoever this is about is an interesting analogy. Caffeine often has ...

Hey there! First off, I love your avatar image - so cool! This poem's structure is interesting! I'm entirely sure if it is deliberate or not, but it adds to ...

Okay, so this leaves me wanting more! I really love the rhyme scheme and as another "girl", I understand the emotion and message relayed here. Women are expected to not ...

First of all, I think the broken up stanzas and shifting alignments of them fits so well with this. So, it may not have been intentional but added to the ...

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This follow-up piece beautifully continues the emotional journey you've been sharing. The opening lines, "If I'd known that night would be the last time I saw you / I would ...

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This piece speaks volumes about the complex web of emotions that can weave through human relationships. The opening lines, "One look, one word is all it took," set a tone ...

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This piece resonates with a profound sense of restlessness and the ceaseless quest for meaning and connection. The opening line, "some of us are born restless with phantom feet that ...

Your poem is a captivating dance of words and drew me into a realm of emotion and desire. It skillfully conveys a complex blend of feelings – from admiration to ...