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Hey there, Dep1ctedINSANITY! Welcome to YSW! Today is review day, and I have chosen to review this little number. I preface that with a comment about my commentary; it is ...

Hey there, lvrpiper102! Welcome to YSW, and happy review day! Let's get into my commentary. I'll break this into commentary on each paragraph with highlights and lowlights related to each. ...

Hey there, spotted pebble! Happy review day! Also, happy almost 1-month anniversary on YSW! Let's get into my commentary. Even without the author's note at the end, I had a ...

Hey there, Via! Happy review day! First off, it's nice to see someone on YSW who's also in their 30s - that is, if your age on your profile is ...

Hello there! Wishing you well wherever you are in the world. For starters, these questions I feel many, many writers have thought. When creating, whether it be in poetry or ...

AH IMMEDIATELY! I am in love! The first line alone had me reading and re-reading. Your comparisons are *chef's kiss*. Your writing inspires me every single time! 👏👏👏 This feels ...

Hello! I hope all is well in your world and you're enjoying the spooky season (my favorite time of year!). I'm a big foodie, with cookies being one of my ...

Hello! Wishing you well wherever you are. I hope you are hungry as I serve up an Oreo review! Let's begin with a cookie or what I love about this. ...

Hello! For starters, I LOVE the message behind this. If more of us cared about the message behind this essay than some of the questions that you have asked, the ...

Hey there Rodger! Hope you're hungry because I'm going to serve a review Oreo! Let's start with the first cookie or what I like about this. The repetition from the ...

Oooooh spooky! Let's make a spooky review snack! First off, I appreciate this, given the time of the year. It felt like a toss-up of a Goosebump novel, a Hans ...

Hello! Hope all is well in your world! The title of this drew my attention, so here I am to write a review sandwich. Hope it's appetizing! Let's start with ...

Hi friend! I hope all is well in your neck of the woods. I'll write a critique sandwich, so I hope you're hungry! Let's get into the bread or what ...

Hey there, AilahEvelynMae! Here I am with a critique sandwich for this illusive prose! For starters, let's get into the positives because there is a lot here! I enjoy your ...

Helloooo Liminality! I'll answer your questions, then do a critique sandwich. 1) The setting is within the poem's title or a "cavern." I enjoy how you have personified this setting. ...