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  • Poetry » Horror, Realistic Re: Pregnant Satan

    Wow this is...something. I'll be honest I was timid to press on this piece, but I am glad I did. What I liked: 1. The flow. I don't know exactly ...

    Jun 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Culture Re: S.O.S

    Hey there! What an intresting piece. I can't wait to review. What I liked: 1. The diction. The words you choose make a poem, and in this case it make ...

    Jun 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: The White Canvas

    Hi there, I'm going to be your reiview this morning. (Obviouslly) What I liked: 1. The point of view. I think because you wrote this from the "canvas's" point of ...

    Jun 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Her

    Okay before I even start my review i have to say holy crap. This is brilliant! Okay now for the reiview. What I liked: 1. The rhyme. I love what ...

    Jun 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: Stars.

    Hi there, aouther2b here and very excited to reiview this piece. Here we go. What I liked: 1. The rhyme. All of that "ight" and "ear" rhyme might seem overwelming ...

    Jun 25, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Death do us part

    Hi there. So I loved this piece which means I am very excited to review it today! Here we go! What I liked: 1. The concept. Brutally honest, sorrowful, and ...

    Jun 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: Honour.

    Hi there. What an interesting piece you have written. I like it a bunch so I am excited to review it. What I liked: 1. The rhyming. Though you jump ...

    Jun 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: No Words Left

    Hey there StreetRat. I am your excited reviewer today. So here is the review What I liked: 1. The imagery. You have many solid images as you describe running (walking ...

    Jun 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Politics, Politics Re: something to talk about

    Hi there, I am here to review this piece for you so I hope you find this of some help. What I liked: 1. The message. I give you kudos ...

    Jun 22, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I promise

    Hi there. There really isn't a need to "tear apart" your poem because it is really good. I will however try to give you a solid and concrete review! What ...

    Jun 21, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Write about clocks

    Hi there. I am aouther2b and I will be reviewing both pieces today. What I like about "Climbing Backwards": 1. The flow. It had a very systematic way of flowing ...

    Jun 21, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Why You?

    I do hope you can get the formating fixed as it does take away from the beauty of the poem. I will do the review now lol. What I liked: ...

    Jun 21, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Yours

    This is a really good piece. There is a lot of emotion is such a short poem. Great job. I am estatic to get to review it. What I liked: ...

    Jun 21, 2013
  • Script » Dramatic, Theatre Re: In On A Secret

    Hi there, So I haven't really had much experience in reviewing scripts, but now is a good of a time as any to start. What I liked: 1. The dialog. ...

    Jun 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Loss of a Snide Conscience

    Hi, I am here to review this interesting piece. What I liked: 1. Continuity. I like how you chose a simplistic rhyme scheme that is easy to follow, and that ...

    Jun 17, 2013


You can't blame the writer for what the characters say.
— Truman Capote