Love the old English! (*hums Rule Britannia*)
O.k. I may be slightly bias to old English-what with my Shakespearean/Dickensian writing style, but I still like it. The rhyme scheme is good-generally something I would find harder than say ABAB. The only time it seemed at all forced is the fourth line. I think that may be due to slight underpunctuation, so you may want to add a couple of commas.
Very well done, hope this helps,
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