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Hi, Ellabliss! First I would say that I think that this is a well- written piece. I really did like it. this is more of a comment than a review. ...

Hi, nanya! I love this poem. i won't review much of the content because Its your feelings, right?? Anyway, I loved the rhyming at first but I thought it got ...

Hi, ConverseFireGirl. honestly speaking, I liked this poem. I like the simile used in this line: "Your eyes are like the universe" The third and fourth lines are very nice. ...

Hi, leilamur. I love this poem. Its nice, sweet and short. The rhyming here and there is refreshing. The emotion of this poem is portrayed well. My favourite lines were: ...

Hello, I hoped you find this review helpful. I really liked this poem. The short lines worked perfectly! The starting and ending was brilliant. Your idea behind the poem was ...

Hi, a very nice piece of work you' ve got here. I loved the rhyming scheme- it was great and didn't sound forced at all. A very unique idea you ...

Hi, ancientforever. I really liked this poem. Your descriptions are great. Another thing i really liked was your ending. My favourite stanza would be: "the river runs so silent through ...

Hi, to tell you the truth I loved this! The free verse certainly worked well. The adjectives used for description was truly marvellous. The way you related one work to ...

Hi, mustlovevampirecats. Firstly, I loved your story. The ghostly aura you created was marvellous. The descriptions you've given for the ghost was also very good. The reference to a legend ...

Hi, hope you learn something from this short review. Firstly, I liked this poem. I liked the descriptions you used for the (pretty) brown- eyed girl. I loved your starting ...

Hi, I loved this poem. The idea behind it was so original. I've seem many situations like these and I know exactly what the condition is like. Your starting and ...

Hello, a review from the apple dumpling gang. Firstly, this a very nice poem. I love the idea behind this poem and that reference to the lotus. Your starting was ...

Hi, another review from the apple dumpling gang. This seems like a really nice, sad poem which has a lot of meaning. To me this poem reflected the regret of ...

Hi, hope you find my review helpful. A well- written poem with a very original idea. It is not often that people consider the disadvantages of being a smart person ...

Hi, Welcome to YWS! This was certainly a very good poem to start with. I loved the idea behind it- it was very original. I also love your rhyming. Such ...