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Re: How to Girl
Hey, PenPacifist! You caught me at a time where I was feeling the exact same way. Dang! I think your poem managed to invoke all the feelings in me that ...
Oct 19, 2016 -
Re: Waiting
Hey! For this review day, I thought I'd do a review for a poem (as usual) so here I am. The subject on which your poem is based on is ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: What to do when your Heart Aches
Hey! Nice read- The topic was well touched upon. The emotions were well portrayed and this made it more touching. This poem is able to invoke an emotional response from ...
Jun 7, 2016 -
Re: Chapter - 1 ( Teen Life)
Hey, Akshata! This is a very good try for your first work. Your plot may have been used before but is realistic and a common experience for young girls which ...
May 5, 2016 -
Re: I don't
Hey, AliceAfternoon. Hope this review helps. Firstly, the first thing I noticed about this poem was the way it flowed effortlessly. It sounds a lot like lyrics when you read ...
May 1, 2016 -
Re: Strings That Pull On My Heart
Hi, Klennon14! My review skills have gotten a tad rusty after all this time but I am going to try and do my best. Let me start with the positive ...
Apr 16, 2016 -
Re: Twisted Heart
Hey, I hope this review is up to your expectation. This is a very good piece of work. I really like the way you have expressed yourself personally and this ...
Dec 26, 2015 -
Re: Conflicted
Hey, I have not reviewed lately so I am apologizing in advance if it is not up to your expectation. Firstly, this is a very good piece of work in ...
Dec 25, 2015 -
Re: Dear Stupid Blank Page
Hey, Snazzy! I saw this on the poetry page and couldn't resist reading it. So firstly, good job with the title. The subject you based your poem on was very ...
May 10, 2015 -
Re: The River
Hello. I thought that your poem was very heartfelt and I really enjoyed reading it. Suicide is becoming quite a big problem and it was a good theme to base ...
May 7, 2015 -
Re: Infamous Mathematics
Hey, fantasydragon01. I am a big fan of mathematics so I really liked the theme this poem was based on. I also liked the rhyme scheme as it did not ...
May 7, 2015 -
Re: My Sister's Skin is Darker Than Mine
Hello, I hope this review helps. Looking at the positive side of things, I loved this poem. The bias behaviour of the people was well portrayed and so was the ...
Mar 19, 2015 -
Re: Hurtful Things
Hello, I really love this poem- like very seriously. I really like the your poem flows which make it nice to read. I like the way the character's feelings are ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Don't Do It
Hello, Tigerlilly. This poem is so beautiful and sad at the same time. You have really expressed the pain of the friends, both the suicidal one and the one trying ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: The Sun's Rays
Hello. I really like rhyming poems and most of my poems rhyme so I am a fan of this poem. I think the suggestion I have is to improve the ...
Jan 25, 2015
