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  • Poetry » Satire, Humor Re: How to Girl

    Hey, PenPacifist! You caught me at a time where I was feeling the exact same way. Dang! I think your poem managed to invoke all the feelings in me that ...

    Oct 19, 2016
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Waiting

    Hey! For this review day, I thought I'd do a review for a poem (as usual) so here I am. The subject on which your poem is based on is ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: What to do when your Heart Aches

    Hey! Nice read- The topic was well touched upon. The emotions were well portrayed and this made it more touching. This poem is able to invoke an emotional response from ...

    Jun 7, 2016
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Chapter - 1 ( Teen Life)

    Hey, Akshata! This is a very good try for your first work. Your plot may have been used before but is realistic and a common experience for young girls which ...

    May 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: I don't

    Hey, AliceAfternoon. Hope this review helps. Firstly, the first thing I noticed about this poem was the way it flowed effortlessly. It sounds a lot like lyrics when you read ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Strings That Pull On My Heart

    Hi, Klennon14! My review skills have gotten a tad rusty after all this time but I am going to try and do my best. Let me start with the positive ...

    Apr 16, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Twisted Heart

    Hey, I hope this review is up to your expectation. This is a very good piece of work. I really like the way you have expressed yourself personally and this ...

    Dec 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Conflicted

    Hey, I have not reviewed lately so I am apologizing in advance if it is not up to your expectation. Firstly, this is a very good piece of work in ...

    Dec 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Dear Stupid Blank Page

    Hey, Snazzy! I saw this on the poetry page and couldn't resist reading it. So firstly, good job with the title. The subject you based your poem on was very ...

    May 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: The River

    Hello. I thought that your poem was very heartfelt and I really enjoyed reading it. Suicide is becoming quite a big problem and it was a good theme to base ...

    May 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Humor Re: Infamous Mathematics

    Hey, fantasydragon01. I am a big fan of mathematics so I really liked the theme this poem was based on. I also liked the rhyme scheme as it did not ...

    May 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: My Sister's Skin is Darker Than Mine

    Hello, I hope this review helps. Looking at the positive side of things, I loved this poem. The bias behaviour of the people was well portrayed and so was the ...

    Mar 19, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Horror Re: Hurtful Things

    Hello, I really love this poem- like very seriously. I really like the your poem flows which make it nice to read. I like the way the character's feelings are ...

    Feb 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: Don't Do It

    Hello, Tigerlilly. This poem is so beautiful and sad at the same time. You have really expressed the pain of the friends, both the suicidal one and the one trying ...

    Feb 22, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: The Sun's Rays

    Hello. I really like rhyming poems and most of my poems rhyme so I am a fan of this poem. I think the suggestion I have is to improve the ...

    Jan 25, 2015


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