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Re: Bird of Flight
So, this was alright as a poem. I can't say it really grabbed me, i think it would have been better if you got really under the skin of what ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Booty Shorts
This poem flows well..And I see where you are coming from. But to be honest this poem seems a bit too judgmental for my taste. Sure, people do dress provocatively, ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: The night is always darkest before the dawn
NICE!!!! I am captivated by the silent winds. They swim through our sanguine nightmares, caress your very fears and hold them with beast like grip. This is night. Thats such ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: reincarnation
Hey there! Hows it hanging? This poem definitely flows really well, and I really like the mysterious ending. Never remembering their whole past lives, just the feeling of hope inside. ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Heavensent
that was really interesting and i wanted to keep reading but then i looked at the title and it seemed to have some substance. nice work, it drew me but ...
Feb 6, 2011 -
Re: Loners
Hey, good to read this. I really like the message it's passing especially as I can relate to it. But I feel you could have got under the skin of ...
Feb 6, 2011 -
Re: A Man Not Alone
This was one cool story! I really enjoyed reading it. What i didn't understand however was the man that visited him. Did he visit him in prison? If yes, make ...
Sep 13, 2010 -
Re: Smile on
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Sep 12, 2010 -
Re: If home is where the heart is, my home's with you.
Woaaah I got shivers reading your poem. I can really relate to it all! So onto the review! While so far away (**this comes off as a BIIIT cheesy the ...
Sep 7, 2010 -
Re: Being Old
Hey! That was raelly wonderful imagery, i enjoyed reading it and i ESPECIALLY enjoyed the not precise use of punctuation. I love it when punctuation is all over the place ...
Sep 7, 2010 -
Re: Kim-e
I found this really touching. I really enjoyed reading it, genearlly it was an easy read and an eye opener. I like the sun to some extent, but I believe ...
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: The dawn perspective
Very nice, my dear friend. The light and the darkness continue to try and destroy each other Smart, nice way of putting it. they had been sense before I arrived ...
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: Ambition
Hey there! Nice message you're portraying here! There are a few bits however that I'd say may need a little work. We are the children of God Great way to ...
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: Truth
This poem was BEAUTIFUL!! Absolutely amazing. I really enjoyed reading it and I absolutely agree, it just blinds us to what God has created for us. The truth like dust ...
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: death
Ok, this poem was slightly weird. I felt like it was more like a sort of comment rather than a poem. I get what you're trying to say and it ...
Aug 9, 2010
