anna91423

Hello, I found this poem very disturbing, which I suppose was the intention and shows how well written it was. It gave me chills! The title worked well because it ...

Hello! I quite like this poem. I love the title- it made me want to read the poem and hear the story behind this great mans death. I think the ...

This is such an improvement to last time, your spelling is perfect, you grammar is improved, the story line is logical and your characters are so funny. I enjoyed this ...

I love this! It gave me chills. The last staza was just hit such a chord with me, you use such an interesting metaphor and the idea of a corrupt ...

Review Time! Okay, first off I really enjoyed this, the modern take on a well known story/characters is always interesting. However, there were a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes. ...

This is amazing! I really wasn't expecting that ending. The story was immediately engaging and I was gripped right untill the end. I've checked through fairly carefully and couldn't find ...

I am yet to read something you've written and not absolutely love it. This is beautifully stunning and utterly frustrating . That is all I have to say.

Hmmm, this was interesting. Their were certain aspects of it I absolutely loved, and others that felt a little off (but are easily fixed). I'll get the negative stuff out ...

This is really good and such an interesting idea! I loved the rhyme scheme because it was unforced and the half rhymes gave a broken disjointed feel which is so ...

This is really good! It's so easy to relate with the main character and there's no way I could've written such an engaging story at 13, so well done. As ...

I love this! I disagree totally with aouther2b, I though it tied in beautifully with the title and that the lead up to the porch scene was totally vital. For ...

This is amazing! I know that feeling exactly, and this is so relatable it even made me tear up a little! Beautiful, realistic, desperately honest. Only thing is that, like ...

This was really interesting. I think it was simple and had a huge effect for such a short piece of writing. The use of cliche's emphasized your point about stereotypes ...

I liked this. I liked the idea that closeness in mind and distance in reality is better than closeness in reality (or at least physically close) and distant mentally. It ...

Awwwhh, this is adorable! The old language is reminiscent of times when great love sonnets were written, which fits into your theme well. I can't get over how cute this ...