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Awwwhh, this is adorable! The old language is reminiscent of times when great love sonnets were written, which fits into your theme well. I can't get over how cute this is this! The beginning really sets up the poem because you can imagine the speaker is sat in a classroom listening to the rain and struggling to concentrate when all they want to do is look at the beautiful girl sat next to them. The use of hyperbole in first stanza is pulled off very well, and made me smile. I hope this is about a real girl and that you guys get together, because it's just so sweet! Ahah, sorry for gushing and keep writing!
thanx anna!I actually am in love and the rain....its a symbol of academics that eventually have caused me to forget the angel that sat right beside me. Grace is real but unfortunately she belongs to someone else.thanx again though