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AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH! You know Dave! Now, to the review. So, I think that you could've came up with a better opening line than what you did. It was enough to pull ...

Sooo... this poem was written a long long time ago, but I still liked it. Dunno why I'm writing this, the author will probably never see it. Didn't know they ...

Hi! I liked your work, and this is my review... You had a few spelling mistakes, but it is hard not to make one. I understood what you were trying ...

Your poem was sad but heartfelt. I praise you for that. It flowed well in the beginning, but nearing the end it started to lack that crystal-smooth gliding-ness on my ...

After typing all that in, I read it. Even though some of the dialogue was a little straightforward and less figurative, I thought that it was pretty decent. Actually, it ...

A poem is structured in stanzas. These are sentences, therefore this is a paragraph It should be knees, not knee's. It should be rubies, not ruby's. You could use commas ...

Okay, so, this is a review. First off, let me say that I enjoyed the poem. I'm not going to lay out what I think you did wrong. I'm going ...

I liked your argument. I reread my older sister's reports, and her lack of transition words will someday be the death of me. Congrats, you did do that. I did ...

**I know this is a little old to review, but still... I liked this poem, but the flow was a little choppy. Like those before me, "The Hall of 100 ...