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I thought this was a really cool way to write a poem. It's fun to read, too! I don't think it needs punctuation, since you can read it so many ...

There are certain parts of this I like. I'm not sure why you put some of the punctuation where you did. For example: Don't want an, umbrella. You don't need ...

Once again, hello! (I am kind of spying on my competition.) I agree with a couple of the things this AngusMacdonald fellow said. I'm just going to pretend this was ...

Gosh that's awesome! I really like the ending! A couple nit-picky things: It's like walking on ice, in socks. It should be it's. It's like losing the remote, to a ...

Hey! I thought this has so much potential! I wasn't quite sure if you were talking about epidemic of amnesia, or just a case of it that is personal to ...

Hey! Wow. I really enjoyed reading this. I just finished Macbeth so I was in an Elizabethan mood. Hehehe. Anyway, I liked that you made it uncertain weather you are ...

I really liked this! I connected with a couple parts. I have to say, your first line was what got me interested. It pulled me in. A couple nit-picky things: ...

Hello! I thought this poem was really sweet. I liked the length. Is it in a certain format or just blank verse? (I'm just asking because I wondered if there ...

I really liked this poem! Some people may have a problem with the lack of punctuation - I, however, did not! My favorite part was: We all want What we ...

Hello! I agree with GeeLyria, you should make some stanzas. I, also was a bit confused with the age, at parts the voice sounds 17, or older and wiser. But ...

I liked this! The punctuation certainly helped me understand how you wanted it to be read. I'm not a fan of rhyming, especially when some lines rhyme and then half ...

Love this! A couple of my favorite parts are: there is glass pressed against my face I liked that you didn't just say, I have my face pressed against the ...

Hello, I thought, overall, the images in this were superb! The title just draws you in and the chorus was pretty strong. One of my pet peeves are poems and ...

Hey! I thought there were some really great parts in this poem. Personally, I am a fan of rant-like poems (all of mine are). I thought the title is perfect ...

I really enjoyed this poem. I'm not sure if you meant to rhyme, but it was subtle (I didn't even notice it the first time I read it). I actually ...