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Love this! A couple of my favorite parts are:
I liked that you didn't just say, I have my face pressed against the window. I did a mental double-take. Really good.Loved the meaning of this line. It shows the point of view of the author and gives the perfect feeling of the season and time of day.
I had no problem with the lack of capitals or punctuation. Anyway, I loved it! *clicks like button*
This was amazing! It had so much feeling and I loved the vocabulary you used! I really liked the part
"the sky flutters gray to the ground,
and drags down with it
a chorus of eyes."
It gives great imagery! In fact, the hole poem gives amazing imagery! All in all this was great and i read it twice!