I love you too

I really liked this. I thought it was fun to read, even if it did take a moment to get used to. I really like how the left side could be taken as though everything that's happening is a good thing, but the right side makes it seem awful, and when you read them together it seems like the person is torn, if that makes any sense.
I don't have anything to say that hasn't been said already. Great job!
Keep going and good luck!

I thought this was a really cool way to write a poem. It's fun to read, too! I don't think it needs punctuation, since you can read it so many ways. One thing that bugged me was you transitioned very quickly from when he came that night into when he left. These are the things I noticed:

He came one night

____________________________________He wanted to play

He took me up in his arms

____________________________________In complete darkness

And I didn’t know what to say

____________________________________I couldn’t say no

When he moved my head to look into

____________________________________To those eyes

His warm, big brown eyes This sentence feels out of place. Sort of childish. Try to use better distcriptive words.

____________________________________But eyes are liars

So soft and gorgeous, so welcoming

____________________________________I saw what I wanted to see.

And once he was through, (See what I mean about rushing this part. I wanted at least one more sentence.)

____________________________________Then they turned dark

He looked at me

____________________________________And I know he lied. (Your tenses are mixed up. Did you want if to be 'And I know he had lied" ?)

“I love you” mumbled softly

____________________________________That boy, he lies to me. I think it should be 'lied'.

Then, a sweet caress

____________________________________I can’t tell him that I know,

I tell him I love him back

____________________________________Because I am afraid

And then, I don’t know what to say.

____________________________________I feel broken,

He leaves, promising to be back

____________________________________I feel used,

He tells me he loves me one last time,

____________________________________And then I never see him again. (Again, I think it should be 'saw'.)

My whisper fades away “I love you too…..”

The format sort of confused my eyes, but that's just me. It's not bad for a first attempt at this type of poem. I'm not really one for love poems, so I'm not sure how to review them, but this one is sweet.
Practice makes perfect. The format is interesting and certainly different. I feel like there should be more of a space between lines though.

Keep writing!
-Greena