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Thank you!(: I will take that into consideration. I want to revise it!(: thanks so much

Very good. it was powerful! It kept me interested! I really liked the title of the Poem. Very Very clever!(: what made you write this? personal experience? An idea? A ...

Ahhh okay. Thank you. I'll see what I can do. (:

Very! Good (: just really long

Ahh clever! Good job sunshine (:

Thank you s.s. Umm call me amberly. Or berry haha. What do you mean about language?

very good!!

Ahhh very good!!!(: talented

OHHHHH my!! loved it(: incredible(: kept me intrigued(: I like the line " I heard about a place, a wonderful place." clever !!!!!(: overall, Well done kido(: -Amber

Very good! definitely so true!(:

Clever piece! enjoyed your work!! continue with more!!(: fantastic job(:

Ahhh! quite magnificent. I really enjoyed it(: well done young writer!( -Amber

hmm. Me gusta! ( I like it) haha. Interesting. It is small ,but refelctive and yet clever. Enjoyed your work young writer! -Amber

Interesting piece. I enjoyed it greatly. Well done!(:

MMMMhhm. Very very good! I liked it very much. A tab bit confusing at times. Well done!(: lovely piece of work