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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: persevere

    Akan brights here for a review. I really love the outlay and systematic structure of the poem, beginning from the title persevere. It was really a nice one, but first ...

    May 22, 2021

  • Poetry » Romantic, Fantasy
    Re: youth

    You poem wows me, and i really each lines, as they give synoptic yo add to the beauty and lively image which it has created as it exposes and sanitizes ...

    Apr 23, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Late Night Drive

    Akanbright here for a review. Mad ooo. I'll go with the previous reviewer. You really have a bunch of Iexicon in your head. Its really wonderful and obvious. I don't ...

    Apr 19, 2021


  • Akanbright here for a review. Men.. I like that wonderful piece of yours, and its really nice to find out that someone here could write about God.. Not trying to ...

    Apr 19, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, Fantasy
    Re: Don't forget

    Akan bright here for a review. I really live the outline, synopsy, and layout structure of your poem, and its really wonderful to read. I love how it encoded. The ...

    Apr 19, 2021

  • Poetry » Narrative, Other
    Re: Wind

    Akanbright here for a review I really live the outline, synopsy, and layout structure of your poem, and its really wonderful to read. I love how short and and sense ...

    Apr 19, 2021

  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: Two Kinds of Rain

    Akanbright here for another review. I really love the poem and the way you aligned it to suit the context of the poem.moreover, I don't think the poem's perfect. Then ...

    Apr 15, 2021

  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: Black Hand's Ticking Claws

    Wow, this is really an amazing one and I love it. Though it is a two verse poem, but it makes a whole lot of sense that is striking to ...

    Apr 15, 2021

  • Poetry » Horror, Realistic
    Re: Death and fame

    Wow. Somebody in this thread can actually write something like this, its really amazing and I love. What attracted me and made me continue reading down is the simplity of ...

    Apr 15, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic
    Re: blushing with a shameful glow

    I seem to like this one and it reminds me of one novel I read back then in school "faceless", about street children and all of that, even if yours ...

    Apr 15, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Poetry is in the eye of the beholder.

    Its a really nice one and I stick to it. I love your writing format and its really cool, and the fact that you really poetry, even if your points ...

    Apr 13, 2021

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Spiritual
    Re: Speckles of emotion

    Hmm. I really love it there. Caught me off guard and I sure expected that from you. Like the others, I love the flow of the poem for myself and ...

    Apr 10, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: It is what it is

    If I think it is what it is, then I would say your poem is totally cool and amazing, and I love the way you patterned it to make a ...

    Apr 10, 2021

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Re: A Confession

    This is a successful and nice one and of would sincerely say I love it and the way and structure in which you laid the poem in is really amazing ...

    Apr 8, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: White Amber

    Hey there, akanbright here for a review. I just want to let you know that the poem was amazingly amazing and I love meter and lyrics if I should put ...

    Apr 8, 2021


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— Isabel Quintero