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Hey! ajruby here from the Reviewing Ravens to review! This really cheered me up, I must say. I love reading fan fics that I understand. :) However, as much as ...

Hey! ajruby from the Reviewing Ravens here to review! I went back and read your first story so I could understand this and it cleared up my questions a little ...

Hey! ajruby from the Reviewing Ravens to review! Mm, winter... My second favorite season. :) There was just a couple things I'd like to point out. 1. I think this ...

Hey! ajruby from the Reviewing Ravens to review! Okay, I'd like to say that I really like this poem! (And to be honest, I can't find anything initially wrong with ...

Hey! ajruby from the Reviewing Ravens here to, well, review!! First off, this piece really intrigued me, as most poetry does. But this piece in particular really snagged my attention. ...

Hey! ajruby here from the Reviewing Ravens to review! I keep finding all these interesting pieces around Review Day! (And personally, I love it!) But there are several things I'd ...

Hey! ajruby from the Reviewing Ravens here to, well, review!! Mm, you just gotta have some poetry that's different sometimes. And this was so interesting! (It perked my inspiration up ...

Hey! ajruby here to review. Lovely poem here! But there were just a few things that I saw needed to be corrected... "The yellow brick road grew old and cracks ...

Hey! ajruby here to review. Okay, I'm going to avoid critiquing your style, as it's perfectly fine and i realize that people have varying styles. I only found one grammar ...

Hey! ajruby here to review! Man... Sometimes you have to have a bit of a tear-jerker of a story. And this was done beautifully! But I did find a good ...

Hey! ajruby here to review. I gotta say, I love reading short stories like this one. It gets your heart pounding and all excited. :) I did see a fair ...

Hey! ajruby here to review! First off, I love how you drew the reader into the story with all the details... And then left it on a cute note. I ...

Hey! ajruby12 here to review. This is a well thought out poem and very well structured. But, as always, there's a couple things to change to make it just purr-fect! ...

Hey! ajruby12 here for a quick review. This, as with a lot of poems, is really a beautiful picture. I love the way you've written it and how it's portrayed, ...

Hey! AJ here to review. Wow... This really blew me away. The amount of pain weaved into those sentences really is moving. Beautiful too. But still, I'm here to review ...