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  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: Amidst assembled throngs

    Hey, AJ here for a review! Oh my word, I love this poem! Revelation has always been my favorite book of the Bible, and this poem really speaks to me. ...

    Dec 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Sinking in Ivy

    Hey, AJ here for a review! Yaasss, sonnets!!! I wrote several sonnets last year in a creative writing class, and I loved it. - "Melts like my heart began to ...

    Dec 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Ojos azules y tiernos: Spanish

    Hey, AJ here! Sooo I speak very, very, VERY limited Spanish, so I had to Google translate this poem... But I think it's lovely! Just a few comments... One question: ...

    Dec 30, 2017
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Narrative Re: Somebody For Me

    Hey there! AJ here for a quick review. These lyrics are lovely! They tell a great story with emotions, but are simple enough to easily understand. I just have a ...

    Dec 30, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Humor Re: What About Joey?

    Hey, AJ here for a quick review! Wow, I liked this story a lot! (My brain is in Christmas-story mode right now, so that's probably a main reason) I liked ...

    Dec 12, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Medic and Doc

    Wow... This sent chills down my spine! So cool! And I love that you wrote it for a family member, especially one you've never met. (I just love stories like ...

    Dec 6, 2017
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Romantic Re: Grace

    Heya, AJ here to review! Ooh, this was a cool story! Short, but it drew me in quickly. The struggle of career vs. relationships, especially for women, can be pretty ...

    Nov 21, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: night-blooming cereus

    Hey, AJ here for a quick review! Ooh, I like this. Your poetic style fits this theme nicely! Just a few comments: - This is just a personal thing, but ...

    Sep 29, 2017
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Inter-dimensional Hide and Seek

    Hey, AJ here! Oh my word, this is adorable! It sounds exactly like what would be going on the brain of a little sibling who wants to be around the ...

    Sep 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: A Clock (extended)

    Hey, AJ here! Ooh, me like-y this! My social life is more like a cheap watch; it never says the right thing and is always getting wound up. Anywhoo, I ...

    Sep 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Snowflakes

    Hey-o, AJ here! Aww, this was so cute and fun to read! I've posted some things I wrote years ago, and I still cringe over a couple of them, but ...

    Sep 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: when i look at her i see you

    Hey, AJ here for a quick review! Ah, love problems. Never fear, because the love expert is here. As I always like to say, "Love is like cement; it's hard ...

    Sep 14, 2017
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: A Guide to Showing and Telling

    Hey, AJ here! Well, I came here to review, but I ended up learning quite a bit! I really like this article. You laid out detailed sections about both showing ...

    Sep 14, 2017
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: Humanity Rising

    Hey, AJ here! Wow, this is a cool story concept. I agree with @Kays; this is a whole lot of info, especially if this is going to be a short ...

    Sep 12, 2017
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Rose Without Her Sky

    Hey, AJ here for a quick review! Aww, this is such a beautiful story! It's simple and short, but still very lovely use of wording. Just a few things I'd ...

    Sep 8, 2017


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