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Great poem! I really liked the repetition of the phrase, "Define life" and how the opposites reacted the same way to the question. Though there are many works about the ...

I loved this! This poem has a place among my favorite poetry on the YWS. My favorite was stanza seven. The italicized words really added power to the poem, and ...

Great poem! I really liked the rhymes and the wording of it. You didn't match the usual words together, so it felt more unique when you read it. Still, I ...

I really liked this. It had a sad feel to it, and the rhyming was great. For some reason, this reminded me of a movie that I recently watched, but ...

Hello! Acm here to review your story. This is really interesting. Stories like this always catch my eye. I just have a few things I might change: 1. I feel ...

I enjoyed this poem, despite the ending. It was very well written in my opinion. I liked the rhymes and the beat of the poem. There were just a few ...

Though I have a few things I would change about this poem, I did like it overall. It's a common annoyance to have people complaining about how bad their life ...

Sad but good. I really liked this and I think that it shows a lot of emotion. I feel like this could almost be turned into a poem. There were ...

I really liked this. I think it was a good idea to put the word falling at the beginning of each line. I sort of felt like with each line ...

I really liked this. The changing of the indents and italics was nice, I thought. The wording was also really good. I just have a few things I would change: ...

Saddening. I really liked the comparisons with the star and caterpillar. Since they aren't commonly used, it made the poem seem more descriptive. It started very strong and ended well ...

Great short story! I really liked the characters and how everything fit together. I could really see it happening. I just had a few small nitpicks: 1. The way Walter ...

Nice! This sounds very interesting. There were just a few things I would change: I’m going to kill that boy She thought. Thoughts go in italics. It's just a small ...

I like your unique style with the poem, and the last stanza made me smile. I think that the title could be changed to relate more to the actual poem. ...

Wow! I think this is one of my favorite poems on here! It was very well written, and I couldn't find any grammar mistakes. The rhymes were perfect except for ...