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  • Other » Dramatic, General Re: Like an Object

    Hi Redbox275, acm here for a review! The title of this piece really caught my eye, and it was very interesting. You kept the tension and suspense throughout the whole ...

    May 5, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Alone, and surrounded by people.

    Hi geekygirl1300, acm here for a review! I really liked this poem, and how it all connected together. The pattern of the verses and the rhythm made the flow together, ...

    May 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Supernatural Re: Siver Ashes revised

    Hi ashleymreid, acm here for a review! Since this piece was short, I might nitpick a bit with the sentence structure and spelling, if you don't mind. 1. In a ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Important Decision

    Hi speakerskat, acm here for a review! I really liked this poem. It had a great rhythm and the battlefield metaphor really enhanced the poem. The only thing I would ...

    Apr 29, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Maybe

    I love this story so much. It has a great meaning, and I can really connect with this character. It is a lot like me to drop everything, lay in ...

    Apr 29, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: dont look down

    Hi orlamurphy01, acm here for a review! I really liked this piece, and thought it had a great message, though there were a few things I would fix. 1. Sentence ...

    Apr 28, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Two haiku / (not haiku -_- )

    Hi TahaT11n, acm here for a short review! I know how hard making good haikus are, so I can understand what you were talking about in your summary. The thing ...

    Apr 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: Don't Feed the Skeletons

    Hi carmenbluestar, acm here for a quick review! I really liked the subject of the poem, and how it was new and unique, taking a spin off of an old ...

    Apr 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The secret dream world of a Book-O-Holic

    Hi fangirldivergent46, acm here for a quick review. I would love a world like this! I'm a huge bookworm, and love all of the books you mentioned. This might be ...

    Apr 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Horror Re: Funeral Music

    Shivers down my spine! I really love creepy poems, and this one got the mood just right. It was titled Funeral Music, so I was wondering if this was a ...

    Apr 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: Stones

    Hi Mahvash, acm here for a quick review! I read the other reviews, which have pretty much covered everything, but I have a one suggestion to make on the organization ...

    Apr 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Dramatic Re: A poem dedicated for a mother's love

    Hi Ayushthepoet, acm here for a review! This was such a cute poem, and I think it had a really good message. So many poems are about romantic love, but ...

    Apr 2, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Alone somehow

    Hi Spartan118, acm here for a review! I really liked this poem for a few reasons. It hit really close to home, especially when I imagined myself when I was ...

    Mar 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: The light behind your eyes (no 2 of The Forgotten Soul series)

    Hi, RadiantShadow! I'm glad that the second part is out! I really enjoyed reading this one. The rhyming in the poem was really great, and it had some very good ...

    Mar 3, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sirens

    Hi, klennon14, acm here for a review! This was a very interesting poem to read, while reading, I imagined many different meanings to it. My first thought was maybe a ...

    Mar 2, 2016


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