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Re: The constant hypocrisy: life and death
Hi RadiantShadow, acm here for a review! I keep liking each of your poems more than the last! The first two lines were very powerful. They draw the reader into ...
Jun 19, 2016 -
Re: the thoughts of a used lemon wedge
Hi megsug, acm here for a review! The thoughts of a used lemon wedge. I don't know why, but I really love the title. Maybe it was just eye catching, ...
Jun 17, 2016 -
Re: Don't forget to say goodbye
Hi Hireath, acm here for a short review! Wow, that was a powerful short story. I especially liked how it all had a reflective tone to it-- like the character ...
Jun 12, 2016 -
Re: A Deal with the Devil
Hi Ashley123, acm here for a review! This is going to be a pretty short review because I didn't see much that I would change. I really liked this piece, ...
Jun 12, 2016 -
Re: Isla de las Munecas (Island of the Dolls)
Hi emmylou1995, acm here for a review! This was a pretty creepy poem, but I liked it a lot. It had a good topic and a creative idea. I just ...
Jun 8, 2016 -
Re: You Are Worth It
Hi RadiantShadow, acm here for a short review! Since I really loved this poem, my review's going to be mostly small suggestions or nitpicks which you can take if you ...
Jun 8, 2016 -
Re: ode to my childhood
Hi MailyNire, acm here for a quick review! This was a really great poem, and easy to read since it wasn't weighed down by descriptions. I thought it sounded really ...
May 31, 2016 -
Re: Thanataphobic Thoughts
Hi DamienCyfer, acm here for a review on your poem. Wow. That really captured the likeness of an anxiety- almost down to where I could feel your fear myself. I ...
May 21, 2016 -
Re: A heavy memory.
Hi babydollblues, acm here for a short review! This was such a meaningful and deep piece, and I don't really have any big suggestions or anything that stood out to ...
May 19, 2016 -
Re: Don't go
Hi gammagamerale, acm here to review your friend's poem! Just to start, I would like to say that it was really powerful. It started with a bang and ended with ...
May 19, 2016 -
Re: Home Isn't With Him
Hi Tigerlilly37, acm here for a review! I've always really loved rhyming poems, so I felt like this was pretty amazing. You used all rhymes, but no verse ever sounded ...
May 12, 2016 -
Re: Diary Adventures
Hi DeathPrince, acm here for a review. This was intriguing. I was interested to read what happens next in the story, though I had to read everything through for a ...
May 11, 2016 -
Re: Silence is the Voice of Thinkers
Hi Darkprism, acm here for a review! Wow. That was great. It had such a good message, and I liked how you used repetition to keep the flow steady. I ...
May 10, 2016 -
Re: She.
Hi heyitsisabel, acm here for a review! This piece had a lot of emotion in it, and it had a plot that moved forward very well. I only had a ...
May 10, 2016 -
Re: Inside/Outside
Hi lizzybookclubqueen1, acm here for a review! From the beginning, I could really understand the character in the poem. I feel like a lot of beauty standards can be pushed ...
May 5, 2016
