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  • Poetry » General, General Re: The constant hypocrisy: life and death

    Hi RadiantShadow, acm here for a review! I keep liking each of your poems more than the last! The first two lines were very powerful. They draw the reader into ...

    Jun 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: the thoughts of a used lemon wedge

    Hi megsug, acm here for a review! The thoughts of a used lemon wedge. I don't know why, but I really love the title. Maybe it was just eye catching, ...

    Jun 17, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Realistic Re: Don't forget to say goodbye

    Hi Hireath, acm here for a short review! Wow, that was a powerful short story. I especially liked how it all had a reflective tone to it-- like the character ...

    Jun 12, 2016
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: A Deal with the Devil

    Hi Ashley123, acm here for a review! This is going to be a pretty short review because I didn't see much that I would change. I really liked this piece, ...

    Jun 12, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Isla de las Munecas (Island of the Dolls)

    Hi emmylou1995, acm here for a review! This was a pretty creepy poem, but I liked it a lot. It had a good topic and a creative idea. I just ...

    Jun 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: You Are Worth It

    Hi RadiantShadow, acm here for a short review! Since I really loved this poem, my review's going to be mostly small suggestions or nitpicks which you can take if you ...

    Jun 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: ode to my childhood

    Hi MailyNire, acm here for a quick review! This was a really great poem, and easy to read since it wasn't weighed down by descriptions. I thought it sounded really ...

    May 31, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Thanataphobic Thoughts

    Hi DamienCyfer, acm here for a review on your poem. Wow. That really captured the likeness of an anxiety- almost down to where I could feel your fear myself. I ...

    May 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: A heavy memory.

    Hi babydollblues, acm here for a short review! This was such a meaningful and deep piece, and I don't really have any big suggestions or anything that stood out to ...

    May 19, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Don't go

    Hi gammagamerale, acm here to review your friend's poem! Just to start, I would like to say that it was really powerful. It started with a bang and ended with ...

    May 19, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Home Isn't With Him

    Hi Tigerlilly37, acm here for a review! I've always really loved rhyming poems, so I felt like this was pretty amazing. You used all rhymes, but no verse ever sounded ...

    May 12, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Action / Adventure Re: Diary Adventures

    Hi DeathPrince, acm here for a review. This was intriguing. I was interested to read what happens next in the story, though I had to read everything through for a ...

    May 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: Silence is the Voice of Thinkers

    Hi Darkprism, acm here for a review! Wow. That was great. It had such a good message, and I liked how you used repetition to keep the flow steady. I ...

    May 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: She.

    Hi heyitsisabel, acm here for a review! This piece had a lot of emotion in it, and it had a plot that moved forward very well. I only had a ...

    May 10, 2016
  • Other » Humor, General Re: Inside/Outside

    Hi lizzybookclubqueen1, acm here for a review! From the beginning, I could really understand the character in the poem. I feel like a lot of beauty standards can be pushed ...

    May 5, 2016


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— Walt Whitman