Zrillis

this piece is intriguing. it has deep thought behind it and its over all word layout. I enjoyed this piece, and would like to share my thoughts. in the mid ...

This was very interesting to me. I'm personally not a fan of this writing style, but that's not to say you didn't do it well. There is a very deep ...

I liked this a lot. its very deep and mysterious. in my mind, I see the keeper as the grave. a place that tells and keeps all secrets. I really ...

This is interesting, and its clear that you know where you want to go with it, however, I feel like a lot of your thoughts here are unfinished. make sure ...

hey there, I would love to leave a review. You have a good concept here, but the descriptions kill it for me. they feel incomplete and broken, also some of ...

I have not read anything else in the story yet but I will have to. Ill admit when I started this I wasnt expecting to enjoy it. I have a ...

I have not read the rest of the chapters, so all I am Reviewing is this part alone. To start off Im not a fan of this tense. I just ...

First off, ill say im not a fan of this non rhythm poem style. But for the reveiew I feel as if you tried to rhyme but its not a ...

Hello I hope you are well on this fine day. So let's get into a review. I would first like to say that I am not a fan of rhyme ...

Hello. I enjoyed this very much and am here to review. The first thing I would like to point out is in line 7, you wrote sistu. I feel like ...

Hello. I am here to review and I hope to be helpful. First of all, I really feel like this could be turned into a great song if you added ...

Hello there, I will give my best review I can. So, I really enjoyed this. Its thought out and the rhythm scheme is perfect. Your ideas and theme comes out ...

Ok so here my attempt at a review This is interesting and truly intrigued me, but is there a point to this? Its short and seems like just a fun ...

Hello. I would like to give you my honest review and I hope this is helpful First of all, I hate the way you structured this. It messes with my ...

This is dark and interesting. Only thing i am confused on is the title. I don't feel The Tower fits for its tittle. Beyond that you have deep imagery and ...