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Re: A Grandfather's Death
Hello! I love this poem very much. The same feeling happened to me when i lost my aunt. Sometimes you cant express what you feel so its better to write ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Drowning; Sinking.
Hello! I like this poem very much!. I can imagine the feeling and since this happened to me when i was younger, i can somewhat relate to this. But this ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Bye Mommy
hello! The way i read your work at first was I thought that there were two persons. But as i read it again and again, i kinda get it a ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: What Once Was Mine.
Hi! First of, this piece and nice and based on what i understood, this person lost all hope and just gave up. Its like this person lost something but just ...
Sep 18, 2013 -
Re: The Clock
Hi! feel free to correct me if my review is wrong :)) So first, "And stared at the clock" For me, i think it should be "And I stared at ...
Sep 18, 2013 -
Re: I thought
Hi! Im new to thing so feel free to correct me if my review is wrong. The diction and grammar is good. There isnt a problem for the formatting. For ...
Sep 18, 2013 -
Re: Longing
Hi! I really like this. Im kinda new to this so if my review is wrong feel free to correct me :)). The diction and grammar for me is good. ...
Sep 18, 2013 -
Re: The Rain Knocks On My Window
Hi! This poem is really nice and i must say, sometimes the rain can be scary especially if its raining hard. For me your grammar is good and your formatting ...
Sep 18, 2013 -
Re: Just Another Love Scene That May Never Happen Again
I really like this. I can feel what the girl is feeling. The warmth of being embraced is truly irreplaceable and the feeling of comfort is magical. Though, i only ...
Sep 18, 2013 -
Re: Books and Music Saved My Life
This is really nice. I'm a music person and a little book person as well. Music is something that people sometimes use to express themselves and its also used to ...
Sep 18, 2013 -
Re: Mind over Me
Hi! The poem that you did is really nice :) I like the way you express yourself and your words are really strong. The way you convey your words is ...
Sep 18, 2013 -
Re: Forbidden
I just finished reading this and its very nice ^^ Its hard to have a forbidden love but sometimes people just cant let go of whom they want to be ...
Sep 18, 2013 -
Re: Apathetic Motives
When i read this, at first, it felt like this person was all alone in the world. Not needing anything, It didnt care, it didnt have any plans. It just ...
Jul 6, 2013 -
Re: Escape
Hi! When i first read this i thought that you were either escaping or running away from something. Its like you dont want to see it or your hurt to ...
Jul 6, 2013 -
Re: Me Is My Craziness
I believe the are times when our state of mind makes illusion, or Another world where we believe to be true or real. What you wrote or should I say ...
Jul 6, 2013
