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  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic
    Re: Hiding

    Heya, 1st of all, I really hope you're alright. My PM's are always open as well as my email if you want it. Let's get into this then, "A smile, ...

    May 13, 2021

  • Poetry » General, Literature
    Re: The Death of a God

    Oh my, your writing style is amazing! I loved the way how you contrasted the 2 (the god and a mortal human) and the different ways in which they pass ...

    May 7, 2021

  • Other » Realistic, General
    Re: Dear,pain

    I love this so much! I can really relate ; so it gives a whole new meaning to this piece of hits hard and deep, just how the pain must ...

    May 7, 2021

  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic
    Re: moving day

    Heya, Rubes here with a short review! "the floorboards creak your name as i pad down the stairs. i try to forget the last words you said to me, but ...

    May 7, 2021

  • Poetry » General, Realistic
    Re: dedicated to the mother i never had

    There isn't much to say to be completely honest! Just sheer talent that you showcased here ; the vocabulary choices are great and are generally very fitting in this piece. ...

    May 7, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Scars

    THIS IS AMAZING!! So imma review it :) "These scars on my heart My soul and my skin, We’re made by family And people called kin" So this gives a ...

    May 6, 2021

  • Poetry » Humor, General
    Re: When Santa Forgot My Gift

    Heya, Rubes here with a short review. For starters, I really enjoyed this poem, the message was clear and simple however great for the reader as they can expand and ...

    May 6, 2021

  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: traffic

    YES GET IT! Anyways, that was AWESOME!!! I love the different themes of the intersection and feelings that the protagonist felt. It worked really well and brought a whole new ...

    May 5, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical
    Re: Models of Clay

    Heya friend, so Imma review whilst I am not at school lol (yes I refused to go in cus I was late and I didn't wanna walk in on my ...

    May 4, 2021

  • Poetry » Other, Fantasy
    Re: pink music

    Heya, Rubes here with a short review. Oh my god, this was inspiring to read so first of all amazing work. Let's start then, shall we? i bend and sway ...

    May 1, 2021

  • Script » Humor, Science Fiction
    Re: A (Totally Not Evil) Bakesale, Act 1

    Heya, Rubes here with a short review. 1st of all, this is a great piece. I can visualize this being performed on stage thanks to the clear dialogue as well ...

    May 1, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: don't ever write poetry

    Heya, It's Rubes here with a little review for ya! 1st of all, I love the fluidity of the entire piece, it has a soothing yet abrupt feel about it ...

    May 1, 2021

  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic
    Re: growing older each day

    Heya! Rubes here with a short review. First of all, I just wanted to say how great this poem was ; I loved the idea of coffee comparing to love. ...

    Apr 30, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: You seeing me

    Heya, just a lil review from Rubes Oh wow, safe to say this hit hard. I can acknowledge and understand the thoughts and feelings brought out in this poem. The ...

    Apr 29, 2021

  • Poetry » General, Other
    Re: Law of life?

    Heya friend, I is here with a quick review xd Honestly, your blogs give me endless laughter and your writing is so serious and detailed in a brilliant way. Onto ...

    Apr 29, 2021

I think the more you understand myths, the more you understand the roots of our culture and the more things will resonate.
— Rick Riordan