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Re: Hiding
Heya, 1st of all, I really hope you're alright. My PM's are always open as well as my email if you want it. Let's get into this then, "A smile, ...
May 13, 2021 -
Re: The Death of a God
Oh my, your writing style is amazing! I loved the way how you contrasted the 2 (the god and a mortal human) and the different ways in which they pass ...
May 7, 2021 -
Re: Dear,pain
I love this so much! I can really relate ; so it gives a whole new meaning to this piece of hits hard and deep, just how the pain must ...
May 7, 2021 -
Re: moving day
Heya, Rubes here with a short review! "the floorboards creak your name as i pad down the stairs. i try to forget the last words you said to me, but ...
May 7, 2021 -
Re: dedicated to the mother i never had
There isn't much to say to be completely honest! Just sheer talent that you showcased here ; the vocabulary choices are great and are generally very fitting in this piece. ...
May 7, 2021 -
Re: Scars
THIS IS AMAZING!! So imma review it :) "These scars on my heart My soul and my skin, We’re made by family And people called kin" So this gives a ...
May 6, 2021 -
Re: When Santa Forgot My Gift
Heya, Rubes here with a short review. For starters, I really enjoyed this poem, the message was clear and simple however great for the reader as they can expand and ...
May 6, 2021 -
Re: traffic
YES GET IT! Anyways, that was AWESOME!!! I love the different themes of the intersection and feelings that the protagonist felt. It worked really well and brought a whole new ...
May 5, 2021 -
Re: Models of Clay
Heya friend, so Imma review whilst I am not at school lol (yes I refused to go in cus I was late and I didn't wanna walk in on my ...
May 4, 2021 -
Re: pink music
Heya, Rubes here with a short review. Oh my god, this was inspiring to read so first of all amazing work. Let's start then, shall we? i bend and sway ...
May 1, 2021 -
Re: A (Totally Not Evil) Bakesale, Act 1
Heya, Rubes here with a short review. 1st of all, this is a great piece. I can visualize this being performed on stage thanks to the clear dialogue as well ...
May 1, 2021 -
Re: don't ever write poetry
Heya, It's Rubes here with a little review for ya! 1st of all, I love the fluidity of the entire piece, it has a soothing yet abrupt feel about it ...
May 1, 2021 -
Re: growing older each day
Heya! Rubes here with a short review. First of all, I just wanted to say how great this poem was ; I loved the idea of coffee comparing to love. ...
Apr 30, 2021 -
Re: You seeing me
Heya, just a lil review from Rubes Oh wow, safe to say this hit hard. I can acknowledge and understand the thoughts and feelings brought out in this poem. The ...
Apr 29, 2021 -
Re: Law of life?
Heya friend, I is here with a quick review xd Honestly, your blogs give me endless laughter and your writing is so serious and detailed in a brilliant way. Onto ...
Apr 29, 2021