WritingforHim99

Hi there! Wow. Love this piece. I don't know why, but this poem really draws me in, pulls at me. Great job. Usually I'm critical of capitalization where it doesn't ...

Hi there! So, for your first attempt at a poem, you did well. :) I like the the idea and theme of this poem, and the way you wrote one ...

Hi there! First off, just want to say I love the storyline here. It was really touching... there's something about a dad's relationship with his daughter that is so so ...

Hi there! So, I get the idea of this poem. Your relationship with this guy is diminishing, slipping away, and fear is creeping into your heart. I like it when ...

Hi there! Let me just say... I love this poem! You've got some wonderful truths here, and I like how, in this particular poem, you chose not to cover them ...

Hi there! So, I really liked your poem -- it actually reminded me a lot of something I wrote recently. :) I keep reading and re-reading it, because it's like ...

Hi there! So, I think I understand what you're trying to say here. Or, moreover, the question you're asking. But the way you've worded this is a little ambiguous and ...

HI there! I like the depth of your poem here. A poem with this level of thought, in my opinion, shouldn't have a rhyme scheme. It can be distracting. So ...

Hi there! So, I like the elegance of this poem, and the way it has a lilting melody. Nice job bringing in the emotion here; I could feel it but ...

Hi there! So, I liked this poem/short story/whatever-you-want-to-call-it. It captures the feel of a spider in all their majestic creepiness. Personally, your poem is exactly how I see them -- ...

Hi there! So, first off, I love the concept behind your art. I agree, the peregrine falcon is certainly a graceful, courageous bird. But I think there are a few ...

Hi there! First off, I'm a Christian. I don't hate what you've written or said here, but I certainly don't agree. So just know that I'm pointing out your flaws ...

Hi there! First of all, I wanted to say how much I loved the inspiration for your story!! :) I'm a Christian too, and to see someone else taking a ...

Hi! So, there is a lot I like about this poem. Your style is simple and calm, but it draws me in. There's a lot of beauty here. You've fallen ...

Hi there! so, I want to say that your poem was very touching. My aunt who was close to me died only a few weeks ago of cancer that she ...