WritingWolf

Wolf here to do some reviewing! This was an interesting piece. I liked how you referred to the mirror as her and/or she, which made it seem more like a ...

Hello, Wolf here to do some reviewing! The first thing I noticed about this poem was that it connected with me perfectly. It was like you'd looked into my life ...

Well, not much to review here. Good job! You did very good at depicting how you felt. Although I'm a little confused, the title of this poem is the same ...

This is a very interesting poem, short but good. I like the beginning, the way you refer to the rain as acid. You make a very good visual with this. ...

This is really cool! I quite like the first stanza, it flows really well. I like the comparison of the stool, armchair, and sofa. It's an interesting view, on what ...

This was really good! The only thing I can think of to say is that this would be easier to read if you used stanzas. I do not know much ...

This was interesting to say the least. I don't really get the third line of the first stanza, but the rest sounds good. I particularly liked the first two lines. ...

This sounds interesting. I may read it if you post it. I just want to point out that "throughout" is one word, not two. The story itself sounds rather interesting, ...

This definitely has a lot of feeling, which is really good for poetry. You had a really nice beginning, but the last line of the first stanza, do you mean ...

Wow, this was really good... Not much to say about the first stanza. I think you did excellent at getting across the feeling of separation right away. The second stanza ...

This is very interesting... It make me wonder what would inspire it. When reading this I found that the line breaks seemed odd to me. But then again I've read ...

Hello Zakatron101. :) This was really funny! It made me laugh a lot. Although I didn't really get the first one about the bear. Was it always the point of ...

Hello ArianaSarroyo, nice to meet you. This is a very good piece. It has lots of emotion, and a good rhythm. There's really not much to critique. The only thing ...

Hello Rogerlddf. WritingWolf here to review your work! I like your theme. And I think I feel very similarly. Life just keeps repeating itself. So nice choice on that! :) ...

Hello and welcome to YWS! I'm here to talk about your writings. :) First off, I'm not sure how this is supposed to rhyme. I don't know if you were ...