Young Writers Society

Rather random, rather funny, rather cute is what this is. The first one was random. It really did not make sense to me at all. But that is good, me and my friends are always random, so this is VERY relate able to me. A bear on a motorbike.. Such creativity lol ????.

The second one I honestly did not find funny... At all. If there is a bully, who picks on, teases other people, do you not realize pranking the bully is BEING a bully. I really do not like the concept. Bullies are bullies because of neglect, and doing that is giving them more neglect. The right thing to do would be to talk it out..

These are just my opinions, do not mind them. I do hope I have not offended you.

Keep on writing .

Pst... I don't know if u can see it, since I am on my iPad, but here is some corn ----> ????

Hello Zakatron101.

This was really funny! It made me laugh a lot.

Although I didn't really get the first one about the bear.
Was it always the point of it to make the bear look like a biker? Or was this something you came up with while you where writing? It didn't make much sense to me. And sounded a little, I don't what to call it, expected?
I think it would've been really funny if somehow doing those things to the bear had actually resulted in getting a bigger blanket.


As for the second one. It was amazing/hilarious. It made me crack up imagining someone walking around with a spider hanging of their back. Oh, how many people would scream and run away from that bully!
I really like that one.


You did a good job. I'm sitting here smiling, even though I just read a really sad poem right before reading this.
Great job! I loved the second one!

~WW

lol too funny.... the bully really is going to get it