Rogerlddf, this is a nice poem; I liked how you ended it with title but in a different meaning of hope. There were few grammar mistakes and spelling errors (appreciate, their, ....) but other than that, it was pretty good. I liked how you used similes in your writing "Never taking time to appretiate thier surroundings
As if they were merely windows on a building" that was an interesting comparison. Good job, keep writing. Hurtado
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