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Re: Who am I...?
Hi, Eros! 'Who Am I?' the title describes the speaker's relationship. But, this surprised me in a totally different way. Especially this line But how can I break up with ...
Sep 1, 2018 -
Re: Cracked Skull
WOW! Another great one! The descriptions given in the poem are incredible. my favorite lines are So familiar, that old buddy pain It cracked my skull and tore my heart ...
Aug 26, 2018 -
Re: If you pass this spot
Hey, Grey! This poem is truly amazing! Your writing style is quite awesome. I found these lines incredible: The streets that I touch With this broom of mine I paint ...
Aug 26, 2018 -
Re: Mr. Lovely
WOW! This is an amazing poem. This poem shares a strong feel. I like the way you have written it. The patrs where you have described the person is admirable ...
Aug 26, 2018 -
Re: Same Old
I checked out the link you have posted above! This song is great! You have such an amazing voice and the lyrics are so touching and just so awesome. Loved ...
Aug 23, 2018 -
Re: Peer Pressure
WOW! This is one inspiring article. I felt motivated by reading this. There were raw truths said here. Many of the students face this problem on daily basis , they ...
Aug 23, 2018 -
Re: Broken Admirer...
Heya, my friend! This is another beautiful poem. The lines of the narrator were poetic, well,l that's what makes the narrator an admirer. A clever choice for the title! The ...
Aug 23, 2018 -
Re: Melting into each other...
It's an amazing love story!!! The feel is so pure and lovely. I like how you've described the character Hiko Hiko. I bet people who read this admire them and ...
Aug 6, 2018 -
Re: Before the fire engulfs me...
OH, MY GOD! THIS IS AN UNIQUE PIECE OF WORK! REALLY IT TOUCHED ME!! THE DESCRIPTIONS WERE SO GOOD. I ACTUALLY SAW AN AMAZING MOVIE HERE. THE EMOTION WAS SO ...
Aug 6, 2018 -
Re: loving
Hi, lilithyoung! This is an amazing poem about how 'Loving a person' will make our live more lively and beautiful. Maybe even in a conceptual sense as well, such as ...
Jul 15, 2018 -
Re: Bruised Heart.
Hi, Eros! This is another great poem. A perfect lament. The pain strikes harder as the words grow stronger, I saw this in your poem. The rhyme-scheme was on pace. ...
Jul 13, 2018 -
Re: Broken Pieces
Hey, Raina! This is an amazing poem. Pretty Intense. When I read this poem I remembered this lines of this song called demons When you feel my heat Look into ...
Jul 8, 2018 -
Re: On The Wait
Hey, Samantha! This is an amazing piece. I enjoyed the read. Mere pages to finish before the final dot is reached. Man, intense! One has to finish his duty before ...
Jul 1, 2018 -
Re: ambivalence
Hey, qalbdaye! This poem was a perfect Lament. I liked how you've let the feelings carve into a beautiful poem. after he I left him, a stage I went through, ...
Jul 1, 2018 -
Re: Poem #3
Wow! You have the knack for expressing the message in a metaphorical way. cats, cats, cats they scratch up the place. they've got those laser eyes, far out from outer ...
Jul 1, 2018
