Wolf

..The cracks and groans of breaking sea ice echoed eerily in the night. Ayra shifted restlessly, her eyeslashes fluttering feverishly as she dreamed. The crude cotton blanket was rough against ...

..The cracks and groans of breaking sea ice echoed eerily in the night. Ayra shifted restlessly, her eyeslashes fluttering feverishly as she dreamed. The crude cotton blanket was rough against ...

A scream shattered the night like a pane of glass, sending glittering shards of sound spiraling off into the night. Poised cat-like by the riverbank, Ayra tensed, her muscles pulled ...

A scream shattered the silence like a projectile through glass, sending glittering shards of sound spiraling off into the night. Poised cat-like by the riverbank, Ayra tensed, her muscles pulling ...

I decided to write this because I got so many reviews of people asking me about the character's [in my story] backgrounds and all that stuff. So, I typed up ...

The air was brisk and refreshing; the cold, clean but smoky perfume of a Winter midnight. The trees swayed gently with the frosty breeze and the moon shed a crystaline ...

A while ago, I finished 'The Outsiders'. I was deeply moved by this story--and shocked. It was just so raw, and so brutally honest. I also saw the movie. Of ...

The lines to this poem came to me last night...please critique! p.S. This is my first real poem on YWS, so don't kill me, okay? -------------------- The sky is grey ...

Ok, this is due Friday. It's a scene from 'Akeelah and the Bee', so if you haven't seen it, it probably won't make sense. But anyways, I really need reviews ...

Ok, some of you here may have commented on my original 'A Winter Midnight'. Anyways, I found writing that piece really fun, and so I decided to start journals. Basically, ...

I got inspiration for this piece from this: [spoiler] "The world is not full of energy and delight but of madness, greed and corruption. Living is hateful, and death is ...

And on that burning night we stood, While the sky blazed crimson above us, And the grass was tipped in flame. The world was on fire, And so was I. ...

As promised, I have posted the revised edition of my original piece 'First Kill [Rough Draft]'. (post275981.html#275981) But when reviewing, please be aware that this is but an excerpt from ...

I first read Wolf Brother a couple years back, and oddly enough, my dad had to force me to buy it. You see, I read up to the first page ...

(I don't know what kind of poem this is, so if it's in the wrong category, sorry.) In case anyone's interested, I wrote this for a girl that I met ...

This is what I have so far for my story. I desperately need help, and...yeah. I know it's short but I wanted to make sure that there's nothing majorly wrong ...

Yeah, here's the second bit. I was writing it before I received feedback on Part one, so there's probably the same mistakes. Any ways, here it is. I know it's ...

I have a battered old copy of 'The adventures of Huckleberry Finn' from 1969, and I think it's been owned by about 5 schools, judging by all the stamps and ...

Author's Note: This is probably the most cliché thing I've ever written, but I want it to be that way. Anyways. As the contest ends on the 23rd, I need ...

The prologue is finally up! w00t! As you might know, I struggle with characterization, so any tips on how to improve on that would be much appreciated! Curdled moonlight writhed ...

Hey guys! Some of you may have read the original 'NN -- Prologue'. Well, this is a rewrite. It's a lot different, and it takes place four years before the ...

***What do you fear the most?Before, I would have written ‘fear itself’, if I wanted to sound smart, you know, quoting someone important. Or, if I was feeling average, I ...

Rough draft. Rated for language and content that may cause discomfort. __________________________________We slam the bathroom door and spin to a collapse on the tiles. It is no longer me - ...

Rated for some language.This has been my brainchild since I was 8 years old. I've started writing it countless times but never really got past chapter three - until now. ...

(I'd suggest reading the first chapter first.)Once again, I'm sorry for any formatting errors!_______________________________________________________Chapter two: She kicked as hard as she could in the