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Re: The Keepers Lament
Hello, I'm here to leave a review. First of all, a semi-silly thought I had is that all lighthouse keepers should just take six-day shifts so no one ever stays ...
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Re: Everything About Him
Hello! Good day for a review, wouldn't you say? This is a cute and sentimental poem. The way you start every couple lines with "I love the way," etc. keeps ...
Mar 18, 2025 -
Re: Tides of a Shattered Heart
Hey, there! Saw this in the green room, and I'm leaving ya a review today! The concept you used in this poem is interesting. "Tides of a shattered heart" evokes ...
Mar 8, 2025 -
Re: Chapter One: The Meeting
Hey, there! I'm going to try to leave a quick review while I have a little time. The opening of this story at first seems kind of generic, but it ...
Mar 1, 2025 -
Re: I've Had a Dream Once
Hi, hey, hello! I'm here to leave a review. First of all, thanks for sharing this piece of poetry. I like that it has a distinct rhyme scheme and it ...
Feb 12, 2025 -
Re: The creation of winter faeries and sprites
Hey, there! I love this little bit of lore and the way you seem to just use your imagination for these creatures. The way you make a distinction between the ...
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Re: Gems and Jewels for Spirited Yule
Hey, there! Allow me to leave a quick review. :) First off, the title is probably what caught my attention. It just sounds like it's going to be about something ...
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Re: To my friend, who'll probably outlive me thousands of years into the future,
Hey, there! Thanks for sharing this. It's very sweet and touching. You definitely established the sense that these two people have had a long friendship and developed a loving bond. ...
Dec 12, 2024 -
Re: The Path I Chose
Hello, and thanks for sharing this piece. It seems to reflect a candid feeling and thought process. It's like it's a personal story but it's put into a form that ...
Nov 18, 2024 -
Re: Unraveled Threads
Hello! Let me leave a few quick comments here. This chapter was pretty easy to read and engaging to follow. Your spelling, grammar, and punctuation seem really good. This is ...
Nov 6, 2024 -
Re: To My Sunset
Hello, let's get into my review. This is really sweet because it is written for someone you know and love. You've taken your time to express your affection and adoration, ...
Aug 6, 2024 -
Re: My Biggest Worry.
Hey, there! Let's get into my review. This essay sort of reads as a journal entry, I think. It has a lot of personal reflection such as one might find ...
Jul 25, 2024 -
Re: October 12th. New beginnings
Hello! Let's get into my feedback. This feels almost like a journal entry in nature, which gives a sense of transparency and authenticity. I appreciate the self-awareness that shows in ...
Jul 19, 2024 -
Re: Assassin Syndrome-A Short Story
Hey, there! Let's get into my review. I think the concept of the butler secretly plotting an assassination is interesting. Even though this is a short story, you have given ...
Jul 19, 2024 -
Re: Blank World
Hello, I'm here to review (what else lol)! First off, let me respond to the suggested questions you left. I understand the title is "Blank World," but there is enough ...
Jul 13, 2024
