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  • Short Story » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Keepers Lament

    Hello, I'm here to leave a review. First of all, a semi-silly thought I had is that all lighthouse keepers should just take six-day shifts so no one ever stays ...

    Mar 25, 2025
  • Poetry » Romantic, Romantic Re: Everything About Him

    Hello! Good day for a review, wouldn't you say? This is a cute and sentimental poem. The way you start every couple lines with "I love the way," etc. keeps ...

    Mar 18, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Tides of a Shattered Heart

    Hey, there! Saw this in the green room, and I'm leaving ya a review today! The concept you used in this poem is interesting. "Tides of a shattered heart" evokes ...

    Mar 8, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter One: The Meeting

    Hey, there! I'm going to try to leave a quick review while I have a little time. The opening of this story at first seems kind of generic, but it ...

    Mar 1, 2025
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: I've Had a Dream Once

    Hi, hey, hello! I'm here to leave a review. First of all, thanks for sharing this piece of poetry. I like that it has a distinct rhyme scheme and it ...

    Feb 12, 2025
  • Other » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: The creation of winter faeries and sprites

    Hey, there! I love this little bit of lore and the way you seem to just use your imagination for these creatures. The way you make a distinction between the ...

    Dec 21, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Gems and Jewels for Spirited Yule

    Hey, there! Allow me to leave a quick review. :) First off, the title is probably what caught my attention. It just sounds like it's going to be about something ...

    Dec 12, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: To my friend, who'll probably outlive me thousands of years into the future,

    Hey, there! Thanks for sharing this. It's very sweet and touching. You definitely established the sense that these two people have had a long friendship and developed a loving bond. ...

    Dec 12, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Path I Chose

    Hello, and thanks for sharing this piece. It seems to reflect a candid feeling and thought process. It's like it's a personal story but it's put into a form that ...

    Nov 18, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: Unraveled Threads

    Hello! Let me leave a few quick comments here. This chapter was pretty easy to read and engaging to follow. Your spelling, grammar, and punctuation seem really good. This is ...

    Nov 6, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: To My Sunset

    Hello, let's get into my review. This is really sweet because it is written for someone you know and love. You've taken your time to express your affection and adoration, ...

    Aug 6, 2024
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: My Biggest Worry.

    Hey, there! Let's get into my review. This essay sort of reads as a journal entry, I think. It has a lot of personal reflection such as one might find ...

    Jul 25, 2024
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Narrative Re: October 12th. New beginnings

    Hello! Let's get into my feedback. This feels almost like a journal entry in nature, which gives a sense of transparency and authenticity. I appreciate the self-awareness that shows in ...

    Jul 19, 2024
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Assassin Syndrome-A Short Story

    Hey, there! Let's get into my review. I think the concept of the butler secretly plotting an assassination is interesting. Even though this is a short story, you have given ...

    Jul 19, 2024
  • Poetry » General, Fantasy Re: Blank World

    Hello, I'm here to review (what else lol)! First off, let me respond to the suggested questions you left. I understand the title is "Blank World," but there is enough ...

    Jul 13, 2024


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