Werthan

This is good. So I'm guessing the message is that you wrote to give yourself a reason to live, as per the time this was written? I think "Negotiate" should ...

This reminds me of these short Kafka stories I used to read a lot of translated into English. They don't sound bad (they tend to actually sound really good in ...

This is beautiful. It comes off to me as "flesh is imperfect, let's trust machines" but then he dies because he trusted and glorified his machine too much. It's the ...

So, do you die when you fall off the tightrope of distances, since you're trying to live again and you keep tumbling down? I also like the nice illustration. The ...

That's nice, but those are formatting options, not fonts. This is a font family: and each of the different lines is a font. Arial and Times New Roman are default ...

I did not understand this at all. I feel like the context did not come through at all, although I guess it's about an animal or something. This somehow feels ...

Dieses Land ist dein Land Dieses Land ist mein Land Vom Mammutbaumwald nach dem Golfstromgewässer Dieses Land wurd' für dich und mich gemacht Honestly from the title I thought it ...

I decided to read this because it reminds me of Kafka's The Trial which I read long ago. Anyways, I feel like this poem is mostly just prose with line ...

I think you accidentally wrote the description of the poem instead of the actual poem. Unless, of course, this is supposed to be some sort of weird postmodern thing, where ...

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The last line needs to be a little longer to fit the poem like "was now lying there dead". Also any poem that ends on "was dead" is just going ...

I found this to be really beautiful, because, even though you don't use rhyme, there's a lot of meter and alliteration and other things so it doesn't just read like ...

So basically everyone should take antidepressants and no one should drink alcohol? I feel like I didn't get this story, like it's something really personal that I don't have the ...

This reads like a diary entry to me. It doesn't read like any of the memoir-type nonfiction stuff I've read. I think probably you should read more of that stuff ...

Am I the only one who doesn't relate to this? I write whatever I have inspiration for, whether it's "within my capabilities" or "attracts readers" or not, and my inspiration ...