WeasleyDragonStar

I just wanted to say that this a bit more clumsily written than your other poems, but that's okay because you acknowledged it. And, story of my life, and I'm ...

I love it! The descriptive language is so utterly beautiful--decorated writing is one of my favorite-ist things in the world! One could argue that there needs to be more varied ...

With simple description, you have captured the complications of war and violence. I love the symmetry. It is the unfortunate tangle of our world, caught in the knots of tragedy ...

Yeah, this takes a LOT of courage and nerve. (I read extract 3 before this one...ha ha. Now it's clearer, what's going on). Again, even though the writing style is ...

It was written simply, but comfortably, and I liked the effect. And, as a Harry Potter enthusiast, may I point out that JAMES AND LILY. LIKE OMG. Okay, had to ...

This is a thoughtful and simple piece of poetry. I personally prefer rhyming poetry, but this is nice too. I like the metaphor, but I, like Speakerskat, am wondering who ...

Depressing. I like the language style. Simplistic yet artful. Her feet take flight, I like that imagery. I love the oversized sweater being the facade to her past. So simple ...

Huh. I myself contemplate the human nature and what it means to be human often, mostly because my main character that I focus has been terribly affected by humans in ...

This is so short that it's hard to leave a review. I sort of like the random single, short 'do' sitting in the middle of the exposition. It seems artistic, ...

This is hysterical. I love the Harry Potter references (in case you couldn't tell by my name, I'm a hardcore Harry Potter fan). Vampires--so right. Some of the references I ...

Hey. Sorry for the short review. All around them are their companions in their own ships, screams and hollers of pride and joy congratulating each other on their job-well done.--This ...

I'm personally not a fan of the problem the protagonist is facing. It just feels like such a small problem in the whole wide world of problems--I've never been a ...

There are a few technical things that you'll have to fix. While your dialogue suits the time period, the actual text does not. With a historical fiction piece (if that's ...

Some techinical errors (in the first paragraph the word wall is repeated too much). The writing style needs a bit of work, being sort of choppy. If you're going for ...

This is a really neat, poignant short story. I think the writing style supports the story, giving it grace. I noticed a one time that you switched to second person ...