WeasleyDragonStar

I love this poem. I've had stories and poems criticized in class because they didn't follow the proper rules (punctuation, choice of words, etc.) or because they were too vague ...

I love Irish stuff. I love Irish fiddling, and at an Irish fiddling class I attended this summer, I learned a lot about the Irish people and the history. I ...

The opening line is awesome. And everything else is powerful and hard-hitting. It kind of sounds like the story I'm writing, in a way. Locking yourself in the mind of ...

"A polite smile was still painted perfectly on her full lips"--I love the use of the smile being "painted". I use it all the time, but I've hardly seen it ...

Zutara forever. I ship it so hard. I definitely like the story. I like the setting and the time period and the romantic darkness. The writing was sometimes awkwardly worded, ...

This is simple, but pleasant and graceful. I like the symmetry between all of the sections of the poem. I really have no criticism. I will say that the love ...

This is a fascinating poem. I love the metaphor of the thoughts being the water, and not being able to survive with simply thoughts. "I'm grounded here though, but there's ...

Okay so I like some things about this poem and I have a few problems. I really like how the tears keep building bigger and bigger bodies of water with ...

I like the first haiku. Judging by the first and third lines, it's seems lighthearted and simple, but the second line gives it more of a melancholy or grievous feel ...

I'm laughing right now because this is really good for a piece where nobody, including the writer, knows what exactly is going on. The imagery is very, very beautiful, as ...

Here to repay the favor! This is such a wonderful poem. I love the transition--it first starts off melancholy and harshly truthful, but then kind of smooths into this concoction ...

Just reading this is making me go insane. I can't imagine the external world mirroring my internal world. I have always struggled with mental illness, but we didn't diagnose it ...

I really enjoyed this poem! It's so prettily written, and I like the rhyming there a special word for that? There is, right? In case you couldn't tell, I'm not ...

Okay, so at first I was reading this, and I was like "Hmm, too cliche. Girl on a warship...acts like a man and challenges as if she's in modern times...I'm ...

This is a great poem! I'm not always entertained by poetry, but this is great! I love the description of the "brittle mind". The metaphor is great, and I love ...