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Hey Dustin! I'll get right down to this. But I notice that you have three poems up and only four reviews. It'd be very much appreciated if you review before ...

This was a great poem. I loved the ending; it was extremely heartfelt. I'm reminded of Perfect World by Simple Plan. Coincidentally, I'm listening to it right now. So, great ...

Hey God! I can say that I absolutely love this poem. The repetition fits perfectly, and I enjoyed it. The rhyming wasn't forced, the last lines flow nicely... Hm, what ...

This was amazing. I can't think of any other word to describe it, but it kept me on the edge of my seat. Each line was breathtaking, and I couldn't ...

Very nice poem, Kuro. However, I think the use of ellipses was a little extreme. Maybe you should replace them with periods and commas. Once in a while, ellipses help, ...

This was a beautiful piece. I know exactly what you mean. Such beautiful symbolism here. Well, I spotted something, though you didn't want a critique. my mothers room. That should ...

Hey Kakali. As always, I'll start with the nitpicking. Just one question: What time period is this supposed to be in? It's a bit ambiguous. Her dress had tears Maybe ...

I voted Emily. I love Wuthering Heights. It's one of the romances where everything actually makes sense to me, plus, she has the added bias of me sharing her name. ...

Ooh, I like this idea. It's very interesting, and I love the idea of a history textbook. It's original. I just have one small comment. Maybe for each heading, you ...

Hi Kakali. I noticed that you put something up, so I'm just gonna take a lookie here. Sorry for nitpicking, but that's what I always do. Were That should be ...

First of all, please review two works before you post anything. Otherwise, I'll get to it. Nitpicky stuff first. correction I loved There should be a comma after 'correction'. times. ...

First of all, time to get nitpicky! eachother There should be a space between each and other. They're two separate words. Tragically, one among them lost contact, This sounds a ...

This poem was amazingly breathtaking. I loved the metaphor you used, and it fits perfectly. However, with these two lines, Everyone ignores the ugly, especially the ugly truth that hangs ...

This is strange. It seemed like prose broken up into lines to me. Sorry if you intended it to be a poem, but it didn't sound very poetic. Still, it ...

If this is your first try, it's really good. However, there were a few parts that seemed strange to me. But first, a little nitpicking. consealed That should be 'concealed'. ...