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Aw, poor Iggy. Iggy's my favorite character, but I don't really like him ending up with Max. Miggy's kind of weird. I prefer Eggy (Ella/Iggy). Anyway, on to the story! ...

Hey Monakeya, and I have to say that this is a marvelous poem. It touches on a very sensitive topic, and keeps everything sounding very real. Eating disorders are a ...

Hey Catfood! I can say that this was a good poem, but you could make it even better. Only a soldier, Whose tears left unshed, Stronger than the battalion, For ...

That was very good, Blnk. The imagery was vivid and powerful, and addressing the letter to God made everything seem more surreal. You kept the subject of this a little ...

Hey, and welcome. Here on YWS, we have rule that says that you should review two works before you post your own. Could you please review some works? Now, time ...

Hi, Vizier. I agree with bubblewrapped; this was very succint. I have just one tiny nitpick here: It's been seven years since You used a very good metaphor in the ...

Hey Ameria! I have to say this is a very good topic. I couldn't find that much to nitpick. Note to Self: Stop reaching for things impossible to grasp. Stop ...

Oh yes, anti-pop, I have to agree with Evi. I was thinking about some poor abused child or animal, and then it's a basketball. I had to read it over ...

Very beautiful, Fireweed. The imagery was vividly clear and the voice of the narrator was amazing. You made it sound like the person really was speaking to their father. It ...

Hi and I'll be your reviewer for today. This is a good poem and I enjoyed it. The rhymes sound natural and overall, very good. You hold me high, keeping ...

This is a very good poem. You have nothing to worry about; the rhyme scheme is present throughout and it is nice and solid. I'll have to agree with Selene ...

Ooh, nice work, peanut. It was short and direct, one thing I liked about it. The word choice was appropriate and I could find only less than a handful of ...

Heya, and I have to say it's an interesting concept here. However, I'm a little lost on the title. What exactly is it? The skies darken As the sun dies ...

I liked this one! I haven't seen your other poem, but this one is good. I didn't find any major mistakes, but you could try to capitalize the beginning of ...

Via, this was one of the most emotional pieces that I have ever read. It looked like it was difficult for you to put it up here. Beautifully written, in ...