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Re: A Detectives Work
Hey there, Here to make a review! Okay, other than this work was purely for the leisure of morbid lovers, I would like to say that it was a little ...
May 25, 2015 -
Re: the Cold
Hey there! Waltzing Here to review this really long... but interesting piece of yours! :) Alright, you started off with something dark in the first few scenes of the story ...
May 25, 2015 -
Re: Fire & Blood Chapter 1
Hey! Here to make a review! ASOIF fan here too. Firstly, welcome to YWS and for a first work here, it was a strong start too. Praise for that! Your ...
May 23, 2015 -
Re: The Clock of Daniel Washer Prologue
hey there! This was a pretty good start for the prologue of your novel. It was well paced and the scenes were richly described. Congrats on that! All i think ...
May 13, 2015 -
Re: Relationship- a ship sailed by bond of emotions
Hello! This essay of yours was a different one from what I usually review here. Points for uniqueness! The reality of what you've explained through this essay is undoubtedly satisfactory, ...
May 13, 2015 -
Re: *Untitled* Chapter One (Title Suggestions Welcome!)
Hey there! Just passed by to say a few things! First of all, this was an okay start for an adventure novel. It's the entire Frodo Baggins begins his adventure ...
May 11, 2015 -
Re: Amor Vincit Omnia (Love Conquers All)
Hello there! I just dropped by cuz i've been dying to review an essay! The entirety of this essay was nicely done, you have stated love in your own understanding. ...
May 8, 2015 -
Re: September Blake
Hey there! I'm just here to say how much I love this work. You have hooked your readers well though such poetic, witty and intriguing scenes. I appreciate it that ...
Apr 29, 2015 -
Re: House Red - Chapter 1: Preparations
Heyo, here's your Waltzing Review! Yeah, reading the A/N in the beginning, of course I went back and read the prologue. Should I leave a review there, I didn't know ...
Apr 24, 2015 -
Re: The Real You
Sybil's here for the promised review! I would just like to say a few things before the enumeration of my nitpicks. First was that the message in this poem was ...
Apr 24, 2015 -
Re: Raya's Heritage Chapter One
Here as promised! Firstly, I liked how the story was made. Truly, it is realistic with what I saw in the wording and dialogue--the entire world of this fiction. Nicely ...
Apr 21, 2015 -
Re: Live with it
Hello, Waltzing here for a review. Firstly, it was a nice monologue-like piece. It had good, personal and honest insights about pain. There is evident potential in your writing and ...
Apr 18, 2015 -
Re: Just Listen
Nice short. Realistic and heartfelt. Your writing was good and how you made the dialogue was a commendable asset to this work, how you've told the narrative in the other ...
Apr 17, 2015 -
Re: The Extinction, The Environment and The Consequences: Why You Should Care
Hello. Aspiring article you have here. A really good Editorial, I must say. Speaks well and is informative. The format for the sourcing was also correct. I salute you to ...
Apr 17, 2015 -
Re: Nothing
Charming piece here! The poem's rhythm was nicely paced as it went from moderate to a faster tempo, it was good to listen to. Besides that "God" needed to be ...
Apr 17, 2015
