Relationship - a tough and powerful word with a great impact on our lives. we all are engaged in some relations in our lives, it could be of brother, sister, father, mother, husband, wife, uncle, aunt, boyfriend, girlfriend, and many more. sometimes we are so much indulged in a single relation that we forget about others, and that one relation is of LOVE. we all love each other but sometimes it is only one person in our life who is the closest of all. we hardly think about the power and impact of a relation on our lives as we believe that it the mind who can differentiate between the relations but it's not true, it the power and the emotional bond with a person which keep our mind in control in terms of relations. I believe that our life is a ship and has a lot of relations on it as passengers and it is sailed by the bond of emotions, well, if we actually see our lives in this way then we would get all the answers of our questions on relation. we hardly take out time to for some important relations in life and when they end we regret about their loss because of our silly mistakes. it is our duty to make every relation lasting forever and with a lot of happy and cherished memories.
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An article which we all can relate to . Something we all agree to. Love in our world is sometimes concentrated in such ways that we all seem to live by one and one person only . Wherein we all need to supply our emotions throughout and not succumb to one being .
A well thought topic like this encourages is to see the people in our lives who love us. Adore us .
Hello nishthabawa2896, I really like this piece, I think it works especially well because it applies to everyone, and a more diverse audience is always refreshing for both the writer and readers.
I always love great imagery, and our lives as ships is a wonderful one. With a subject as broad as life and the relationships we have during it, imagery I find, is even more powerful. Maybe this is because it has a much greater presence, by meaning different things to each person who reads it. Keep that in mind for further writing (which I hope you will do), that each person can interpret your work differently with this kind of topic.
I enjoyed the creativity with which you describe relationships, which you successfully convey as powerful as they truly are and can be, and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future!
Hello!
This essay of yours was a different one from what I usually review here. Points for uniqueness! The reality of what you've explained through this essay is undoubtedly satisfactory, considering that this is sort of an editorial/opinion.
As Kinzaa said, there were punctuation mistakes and you didn't capitalize the sentences. Was there a secret meaning to this? Is it a sort of metaphor? Another thing was that I did not see the paragraph breaks. It was supposed to break at
And then the next break at...
These paragraph breaks could help your readers understand the structure and message of your work. You could also lengthen this topic if you want, so that the intensity of your message would really take its toll on the readers. You could provide some graphic/real life examples to prove your case. (this is only a suggestion, I completely understand if you defend the statement, saying it is your form of art/expression/opinion)
I hope this was of help! Good luck with your further writings!
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There were many punctuation mistakes but apart from that I really liked the realistic thought of this essay because from long I was thinking about writing something on this topic and then I got this writing, I completely agree with you. People these days are so involve in loving their soul mate that they had lost the essence of other relations and its awful because we forget all those time those other relations were there when we have nothing but that's like a whole ritual something now.
I don't think people these days realize what they're losing until its long gone away from their lives. Then there comes regret to be very honest I don't get this thing that why people regret when they know they did this thing intentionally because when we're losing someone we have this in corner of our minds but we really don't give this a thought at that time so its a silly thing.
If people start to realize their duty in this world we will have a bright future and some genuine personalities but all depends on "If" so I guess that's not happening any time soon and sadly its ungrateful of us.
I hope you'll go through your essay and will do the correction of mistakes. Keep writing, thank you.
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