Vivian

My only problem is that you didn't capitalize the first letters of the first words of the sentences, and there needs to be punctuation. But other than that this is ...

Aw, how cute. The entire time I was reading this I pictured your avatar and kept wondering how that man couldn't think sh was cute. I love the two animals ...

Well then, thank you for ruining my perfect love story. Well, I only see one little mistake: "Maybe it was his the glimmer of his eye", wait, does he only ...

Gosh, this really describes that feeling of not wanting to grow. There is always so much left behind. So, yes I love the poem, I feel like I've read it ...

Love the song and don't feel stressed it's good. But the second line trips me up. The double space in that line messes me up a bit, but I think ...

Well, I think the point of longing is fine, but you could change it to something about dreams, or The Internal Struggle. After all the narrator is speaking to a ...

Um great poem, it's really heartfelt. I kind of feel like it's one of those love and war stories and that the theme song would be born to die. Um, ...

Aw, I get it though. I love how you wrote this, I can really (kind of hate myself for this) feel your pain. (No pun intended.) The flow is great, ...

No I think the ending is good, it doesn't seem very rushed to me. Great rhyming and a nice flow too, slightly lyrical though I can't explain how. I feel ...

First off, that was great. If this was a prompt from school I'd really love to know the teacher's reaction. How tall are the kids in your class if you're ...

I feel like I just read Shakespeare. That's a lot of thought, and I believe it might be hard for some people to digest it. But I think you just ...

You don't poet much? O-o :) Still, it's good, gives off that philosophical sense that makes you think deeply about the world and yourself. Especially the last line "For all ...

Sup, yer old friend Vivian here to try and give a review. I only so one mistake to point out and it is "those who dies so could call ourselves ...

Have you ever seen Halloween Town, they were great movies and I think once a show? The idea of it being Halloween all year round somewhere is both intriguing and ...

First reaction: What the heck is this poem about?!! Second reaction: The ascent to guessing. And for some reason my mind is at sea and I see the narrator as ...