Vivian

Who's the Angel? Hey Viv here. I like your poem Brittany, it's sad. "You want to know if they are tears of joy" this line doesn't seem to fit since ...

Hello, Vivian here. First off vvrrrr. That's like evil and why children they haven't done anything wrong yet? Truth be told I'd go for adults. Anyway that last part I ...

This hot. Viv here, nice story. I especially like the song continuously playing. Is it there prom night or senoir trip or something, because that sounds like the highlight of ...

Hey Viv here. You did rhyme, it gave the poem a nice flow. It's a good poem very creative and detailed. I've stared up at the ceiling about a million ...

Vivian here. What does this poem symbolize? Is it their lives, is that why the girl said if wasn't his burden to bare? Either way it's a nice poem, I'd ...

If you never stop wishing doesn't that mean you never stopped hoping? Viv here, I'm curious, is the title Naive Wishes in a Sullen Void of Hopelessness, of is Naiv ...

Hey Vivian here. Gosh the second chapter is more bloody than the first, poor patients 1and2. What a gruesome way to go. At first I thought it was patient two ...

Nice~ It's not a secret anymore, but it's still a great imagination. "The things that give our lives a sparkle, are rarely ever real." Great poem Kaspyn, nice descriptions too. ...

Hey Dragon. Love your poem, so-philosophical. "Life Is a Journey", that's a nice way of thinking about it. Especially since the journey is worth more than the destination. Your descriptions ...

Nice~ ;) This poem is so true, society gives no room for love for our fellow man. When did it become this way and when will it end? Viv here, ...

Hi Abi, welcome to YWS. My first impression after reading this was, um... But have reading it a second time, I want to know, is this true? It's a good ...

"Laughs' ^o^ That last line is hilarious. It's really not what I was expecting, but I say you should keep it. This is one heck of a love poem if ...

WTF. This is kind of strange... Nope, just strange. I'm not sure what this poem should mean, not a clue. I had my thoughts from the blur, but now I'm ...

Hi Holysocks. My first thought at the end of this poem was "Wow! That's deep". Does this poem mean that you're annoyed that you feel no one hears you, or...? ...

Now that's morbid... and romantic? Viv here, how's it going? I only see one mistake to point out and it's "bliis" instead of "bliss". But doubles like that confuse me ...