Okie dokie, hello there.
I'll start off by saying this is fantastic. I couldn't really work out why it's called Angel Wings, apart from that first line which starts of this amazing description of the angel - or supposed one if the wings are actually a metaphor (that just hit me that it could be, so I thought I should add it in.)
I also think the rest of it is great. Personally, I prefer the short poems that fit small snippets of information into them - they just seem far more interesting. They leave you with this feeling of these questions overloading: why is she sad? Is she always sad? Does she not want to be an angel? Etc. if I didn't have these questions to ask, I would've told you to get rid of some information, but no, I really think this is done well. I can tell that you put time into writing it; into finding a subject you could describe and leave questions in its wake. Bravo.
- Bethany
Points: 490
Reviews: 23
Donate