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Virgil

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Ocean of Darkness A letter

    This is Nikayla here for a review! So like Zoom, I wasn't sure of what to think of this, is this a prologue? Is it just a letter to start ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: avoid being mind-controlled.

    This is Nikayla here for a review! Tackling this on Review Day since it seems to have been swept over before. Let's jump right into the review. As the reader ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Forgive Me Father, for I Have Sinned

    This is Nikayla here for a review! Hi, Biluata, this may be the first or second time I've reviewed your poetry, so let's jump right into this! The structure that ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: You and I

    This is Nikayla here for a review! A poem made out of tercets. Interesting. Nonetheless, let's jump right into the review of the poem! The first stanza strikes me as ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Feather [1]

    Finally here for a review, as promised! So I'm really impressed that you wrote this all in second-person, because I know something like that would have broke me as a ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Other » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Four-walled Box

    This is Nikayla here for a review! While I think that monologues can be well-written at points, I rarely ever think that they do well being random, and that's how ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: A Message to You

    Since I know that probably nobody else wants to review this, let's jump right into it. You know how I stand for the most part on your rapping, and this ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Just One More Kill/ Chapter 1

    This is Nikayla here for a review! This was an interesting start for a first chapter. I had a couple of things that I was wondering about before I delved ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Missives From the Dreaming #17

    This is Nikayla here for a review! I found this to be an interesting story, and it seems to be based off something that actually happened? I like the idea ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Fire and Water

    This is Nikayla here for a review! I enjoy dual poems that often go together or follow contrasting themes, and this is one of the classic ones, fire and water, ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: in sickness and in stealth

    This is Nikayla here for a review! I'm going to kick off my thoughts on the poem similar to @niteowl in that the flow of the poem feels quite frantic ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Other Re: And So The Clock Ticks On

    This is Nikayla here for a review! This piece is one that interested me and happened to catch my eye, so let's jump right into the review! We start off ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Goodbye

    This is Nikayla here, dropping in for a review. Interesting short story. Let's jump right into the review and what I thought of it! We start the story off with ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: the rebel's dance

    This is Nikayla here for a review as promised! What an interesting line to get from the Poetic Line Generator. Nonetheless, let's jump right into the review! I also find ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Verse

    This is Nikayla here for a review! I've never really got the chance to note this, but I enjoy the way that you format your poetry when it comes to ...

    Jan 29, 2017


who you become at your worst isn't who you are
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