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Virgil

  • Poetry » Realistic, Politics Re: Let's make this the last truth

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! You've posted another poem so quick! I thought I'd drop by again after reviewing and being interested by the first poem ...

    Jul 4, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Dear, Mortals: Devil's Love

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! I admit that I haven't read an abundance of other poetry that's come from you, though I may as well delve ...

    Jul 4, 2017
  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: Impotence

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review, as promised! First of all, I wanted to go ahead and welcome you to the site once again! I do hope ...

    Jul 3, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: ​i had a dream where dad chased after bombs

    Were we talking about poems with the word 'bomb' in the title? If so, then it's appropriate because I thought this poem happened to be pretty much the for reasons ...

    Jul 3, 2017
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: God's Assassin ★ 1

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So I originally went into this thinking this to be a novel without reading the label, though short stories are fun ...

    Jul 3, 2017
  • Poetry » Humor, Narrative Re: Grape Expectations

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! I keep meaning to drop in for a review on this poem, though I also keep forgetting to stop by! I'm ...

    Jul 2, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Culture Re: The Rain

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So I wanted to first point out that there are no stanzas in this poem, which are something that I suggest ...

    Jul 2, 2017
  • Other » General, Other Re: My thoughts on Fidget Spinners

    Hi there, briangimmer! Welcome to YWS! First off, if you ever have any questions, don't be afraid to ask me or any other names in green or red. With that ...

    Jul 2, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Some People Want To Watch Me Burn

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So I believe that I've reviewed at least a bit of poetry of yours before. I don't remember how I felt ...

    Jul 1, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: you call me selfish

    This is Nikayla here dropping in a review! Comparing this version to the last one, this one doesn't have the sort of Rupi Kaur type ending and this one doesn't. ...

    Jul 1, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: when we're young

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! I talked about restraint with imagery and holding back on not using every chance there is to use it in existence, ...

    Jul 1, 2017
  • Other » General, General Re: pericarp

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So I'm hoping to do both you and Apri in one go since you both have poems that take advantage of ...

    Jul 1, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: Off Court - Chapter 2.2

    Been reviewing Blue's novel though I thought I'd come back and try and catch up over here a bit too! The final review to go for tonight since this is ...

    Jun 30, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: mom, make it bettr

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So I don't often see spelling errors used intentionally in a poem for a stronger emotional impact. Or at least, I ...

    Jun 30, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 10

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! Finally we're getting a look into Redway's perspective. This is quite the surprise for me since I assumed that this chapter ...

    Jun 30, 2017


There are those who say that life is like a book, with chapters for each event in your life and a limited number of pages on which you can spend your time. But I prefer to think that a book is like a life, particularly a good one, which is well to worth staying up all night to finish.
— Lemony Snicket