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Re: My Best Friend Cuts Herself
I'm so sorry for your friend!
Jul 3, 2016 -
Re: Forget Me
Holy tostitos, Socks! (I hope you are fuzzy socks to wear in winter!! xD) I have this page bookmarked on my Internet Browser, because I love coming back to this ...
Jun 22, 2016 -
Re: Blood and Fire
This sounds very depressing - wait don't go friend, I liked this and I'm not going to criticize it!! Don't get me wrong, I gravitate to these kinds of things. ...
Jun 19, 2016 -
Re: Fallen Angel
Wow. I reviewed your latest work and now I'm doing this one, as well as eating candy (from the Street Fair) and listening to "Doubt" by Twenty One Pilots. I ...
Jun 19, 2016 -
Re: Blade Of Blood
New favorite relatable post on the ENTIRE website. I can't even begin to explain how this all comes back to me. If you check out the "About" page on my ...
Jun 19, 2016 -
Re: 17 Seconds
The title was what made me read this poem. I have to admit I'm most definitely captivated by poems and stories in essence with time, because we will run out ...
Jun 11, 2016 -
Re: The Color Grey
Hi there! Welcome to YWS, as the others have said so already. I just finished reading your poem - of course *facepalms self xD* - and grey is one of ...
Jun 11, 2016 -
Re: Two Years Ago
Is this a true story? Because if that's the case......WOW. I'm so sorry about the sadness in this poem. I felt some of the rhyming was forced, but overall I ...
Jun 10, 2016 -
Re: Dear Upstairs Neighbor
Hey there! I loved reading your poem! This has powerful lines, humor, sarcasm, and great tone throughout. Though some may suggest stanzas, I found I could read it quite well. ...
Jun 10, 2016 -
Re: Hell
Hi! I *obviously* read your writing work and must I say, some good comments are heading your way. The visual imagery I get when reading this is just amazing. I ...
May 8, 2016 -
Re: I'm here too.
Brief. Questionable. Thinking. Wondering what all to put on here since I need the points and besides there's no harm in telling a user what I feel/think/see/recognize/dislike/like/cherish/get after re
Feb 21, 2016 -
Re: Teenagers
This is a beautiful work of writing. I thoroughly liked it. I am 14 and there are times I feel exactly like this, minus wanting to smoke. I hope you ...
Jan 30, 2016 -
Re: S.A.U. (Something About U) Chapter Five: Unwanted Consequneces
Wow. I have to say I am impressed. I just read this, even though I haven't read the earlier chapters. But wow. I really liked how your chapter evenly flowed. ...
Jan 30, 2016 -
Re: Once More
Okay, girl, this so reminds me of my boyfriend. And of the song "A Thousand Years" by Christina Perry. This is an adorable and sad boyfriend of 3 months then, ...
Jan 27, 2016 -
Re: "I Would Kill Myself"
I totally agree!! I'm sorry you wrote about a topic like this...but also glad, because I can relate. I hope you're not suicidal!! Please don't be!! :( There's no changing ...
Jan 27, 2016
