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Re: Technolgy: New Concept Today
Eye catching hook, Nice! You have a great topic about technology it has a wide range. It is very interesting.
Oct 3, 2013 -
Re: The Unveiling of the Disguise
Your title is eye catching and it made me curious. Nice! Your hook got a simple words but has a deep thought, I like it. Your essay is interesting. Your ...
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Re: Importance of Technology
Your hook has a very nice thought but you should made it more eye catching. You have little errors but in all it was nice.
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Re: Technology of life
"Our life should not be control by the modern technology." I agreed with this because we, beings should rule over this kind of things. I am hooked with this. Nice! ...
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Re: Technology: Part of Life
Technology is really a exercise for human imagination, I agreed with it. Technology nowadays really help in our education. Nice citation about technology and it is a very good essay. ...
Oct 3, 2013 -
Re: Technology; Molding the Future
Nice title I agree with it. The citation was very well elaborated. Over all, it was a nice and very interesting to read especially nowadays.
Oct 2, 2013 -
Re: The Two sides of the Same Coin
okay, no problem. :)
Oct 2, 2013 -
Re: Modern delights
What a nice catching hook! :) I agreed with it. The essay you've done was great but some little corrections. But in all it is nice and interesting.
Oct 2, 2013 -
Re: "Technology - in various ways"
Technology is gift of God made by humans. Technology really surrounds us. The essay you've done was great but some little corrections. But in all it is nice and interesting.
Oct 2, 2013 -
Re: Expressing Technology
The essay you've done was great but some little corrections. But in all it is nice and interesting. Lollapalooza is a very effective hook. Very good! :)
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Re: “Technology can help”
The essay you've done was great but some little corrections. But in all it is nice and interesting.
Oct 2, 2013 -
Re: The Two sides of the Same Coin
Technology makes our lives different. The essay you've done was great but some little corrections especially the references too much big font. But in all it is nice and interesting.
Oct 2, 2013 -
Re: “TECHNOLOGY – A ‘PRO’ at the Society”
Technology is really a big word. The essay you've done was great but some little corrections. But in all it is nice and interesting.
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Re: Technology: What would be life without it?
Technology really has a wide range.The essay you've done was great but some little corrections. But in all it is nice and interesting.
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Re: Gazing into the future
The essay you've done was great but some little corrections. But in all it is nice and interesting.
Oct 2, 2013