UshertheThird

Hello, Bloodvein! I like the idea behind this story, and I think Ayn Rand fanfiction is a very interesting idea. I recall that Anthem had a very open ending, and ...

Hello! This story is very interesting. I like the style you use; the narrator has a strong voice, and the present tense works very well. The descriptions and the dialogue ...

Hello, Christina! This story is captivating, and I like where it is going. Both of the characters seem interesting and likeable. The chapter left me with a lot of questions. ...

Hello there, yubbies! I enjoyed reading this poem. I like the way it's structured, and the repeated line works well. All the questions that are asked are very interesting, and ...

Hello! I enjoyed this poem. It's cleverly written, and I really like the unexpected ending. The poem is short, but the descriptions manage to draw me in. Seeping through the ...

Hello! I really like the idea behind this poem. I've seen death as a character before, but where you took it, with death offering a last wish, was very interesting. ...

Hello, Mystique! I like the story in this poem. It feels like a Western story, which is something I haven't seen before in a poem. The structure works really well ...

Hello, SubtleSanity! I think this will be a very exciting story. I enjoyed reading the first chapter. The ideas in it are very interesting, and it seems like you put ...

Hello! I really enjoyed reading this poem. The descriptions are great, and the playful tone helped to put a vivid picture in my head. Tasteless morsels on tongues which chime. ...

Hello! I found this poem to be very thought-provoking. The ideas in it are very interesting, and the metaphor you use to explore them is quite powerful. The idea of ...

Hello! I really like this poem. It addresses a very interesting idea. People hiding themselves from the world is an idea that I've seen often, and this poem has a ...

Hello! I enjoyed the first chapter of your story. It does a good job of staying suspenseful and building tension. The descriptions are very good, and I especially like the ...

Hello! This is a really great story! Many of the descriptions are fantastic, and I especially like the way you describe the setting at the start, and also the way ...

Hello! This is a gripping start to your story. It is an exciting opening, and it does a good job of building tension for what is to come. The main ...

Hello Ravenboy! I really like the word choice in this poem, and the imagery it creates. It allows me to picture the scene clearly. This line seems especially beautiful: "While ...