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Urba

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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Rise

    Hello Lightsong!!!Urba here to review... First of all I wanna say that this poetry is really really awesome. It actually speaks of my mind. I promise I'll try to help ...

    Sep 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: River

    Heya!!! Urba here for a review(of course) Actually my half-yearly exam is going on so I really have a time shortage but I logged in today and donizback told me ...

    Jun 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Bubble of Water

    Heya I was just hovering around your works and I saw 15 comments here so I came here...just reviewing to review. Ahh this really was good as you usually write ...

    Jun 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Summer Nights

    heya...Urba here for a review... This poem was overall goood and no I should say very good. At first It's your imagination skill which is awesome and faunafaun is right ...

    Jun 4, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Wings stroke her

    Heeeyaaa...I'm Urba Here to make a review...of course... Yaaaaayyyy....(Is the expression of everyone after reading an amazing piece and mine also) Well I would like to thank you first for ...

    Jun 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: I've Got a Cat Named Boobie

    Hey Deanie...It's urba hare for a review... After reading the note I felt real sad...of course I can feel your great aunt's feelings as I myself love dogs and cats ...

    Jun 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Culture, Dramatic Re: she tells you your truths

    Hiiyaa...It's me Urba here for a review!! This poem was great if can really get into the throw and the massage behind it was also great... the steam hits you ...

    May 18, 2015
  • Poetry » Politics, Culture Re: My empire

    Hiiya Arash... At first I welcome you as you've joined this amazing site today!!!I hope you will enjoy hanging out with friends and wish you heaps of chocolates...And are from ...

    May 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: Complaint to God

    Hiii...It's me again...(Of course I don't have to write 'Remember me?' and stuff cause you do remember me) :) This poem was awesome...and so much I like the topic(It's somehow ...

    Apr 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Action / Adventure Re: I Swear Upon The Moon

    Haieee.....Urba first I'll say GOOD EVENING.... Now what do we get awesome poem with awesome rythm and awesome flow of thoughts...this whole thing is just mmm....I guess you are a ...

    Apr 18, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Bliss

    Hii...good afternoon...OMIGOSH...Sienna made her first review here at last!!!!...@siennabrooks yeah buddy request for ellipsis granted... :) Okay kay kay...Bliss oh Bliss...you know a thing your title

    Apr 17, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Hourglass shatters.

    Heeeyyyeee.....Urba here for review Happy siblings day ;P Omigosh...it's so much like Bella!!! In New Moon...ha ha ha...this was coooolll.....I really loved it...you really know how to make the feelin

    Apr 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I See

    I see a poem with no rythm at all... It's just a bunch of 'I see'-s... @prithamrittika is right that the lines don't have feelings...u should read it aloud for ...

    Apr 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Love Life

    Heya...inkwell...urba here for review... Man you should have rated it 18+...or at least 16+...ha ha ha... So, let's come to the point... Actually there isn't any point to it's an ...

    Mar 25, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Like Clockwork

    Heey its me Urba...i see its your first story was good I must say...but sorry...just good I like the title...and at first the story was flowing very nicely... You said ...

    Mar 4, 2015


No man or woman who tries to pursue an ideal in his or her own way is without enemies.
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