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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: No One.

    Hey there, short,simple,to the point and yet so full of emotional. I love blank verse because it harbors the most intimate of thoughts and feelings. Keep writing. Good job! xx ...

    Jun 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The robin

    Hey there, Good poem. Enjoy reading it. Keep on keeping on. xx Upile xx

    Jun 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Floral stains, Cats and Love trains

    OMG i had no idea that u joined this site!! well dankie!!

    May 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: These Rains

    Hey there, I am Upile. i will be reviewing your work. "The drops of crystal fall down They fall so hard, they fall so fast. Breathless, left alone in the ...

    Apr 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Girl in the Room

    Hey there I love this. Free verse is amazing, it allows words to flow right out of u without having to keep to the complexities of of rhyming. Keep it ...

    Apr 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: What We Will Be

    Hey there, I love the way you construct your sentences. Good work. Bravo

    Mar 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Vow of Silence

    Hey there This is very deep. I like it. One little problem, the part where you say "silence and mute will fill every room", the word 'mute' though it grammatical ...

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Tickled Pink Sky

    Hey there Wow there is a lot of feeling in this poem. Emotion is always great! Especially if it is expressed as well, bravo! Keep it up! xxx Upile xxx

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Connotations

    Hey there, great poem. It was well-thought-out, simply structured but truly effective. It flows! Bravo! xxx Upile xxx

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sanity vs. Love

    hey there, Bravo!!!Keep up the good work!!

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: My Home

    Hey all, You are truly awesome!! Thanks for the reviews. I totally love how this poem got such good feed-back. @ Cali poetry can remind you of anything, its some ...

    Mar 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: My New Poems

    Hey there, Thank you very much. These were all written in one day. I was high on inspiration!! Thank you, I will totally continue. much love, Upile.

    Mar 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: My Inspiration

    Hey there, Wow this is such a nice poem. Love it!! Bravo!!! xxx Upile xx

    Mar 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: speechless

    Hey there, Bravo! A very cute poem. xxx Upile xxx

    Mar 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Waiting For Life

    Hey there, Bravo!! Very nice, very descriptive, very beautifully written. Keep it up!

    Mar 1, 2011


If a story is in you, it has to come out.
— William Faulkner