TylynRae

It saddens me that this has had 22 views and has yet to be commented on once! I really love this poem and I think it's definitely going to make ...

I like this poem and it proves that not all poems have to be ridiculously long in order to get a message across. However, the ending of this poem turned ...

Ohmigee! I loved this, very very much. It was flawless and I've recently experienced something to this degree where I was just really angry at myself. But thank you so ...

Hello there =] I liked the message of this poem, and here recently I've had a lot of religious disputes with someone. I myself, am questioning whether I'm a Christian ...

I'm not sure how I feel about this. You have everything you need to make a story. Characters, background, plot, problem and so forth, which is great. I'm just not ...

Overall this poem is good. It's usually not a subject matter that I read, but I think it was descent enough. Your flow is really good though I'd use a ...

This poem had really good flow at the beginning but sort of fell apart a little in the second to last stanza. I think overall the feel is really good ...

I just had a few nit picks here and there. With one of the lines the MC is talking to herself. And she outrightly says that her sister committed suicide. ...

I agree with Grif, I liked the title a lot and the material was good, but its not cut out to be a 'love' poem, which I think is a ...

I agree with the pup, the spacing is strange. I'm not quite sure on the flow but then again I have no idea how it sounds. I do wish they ...

Um. This was fairly explicit. So I'm glad that you put the rating on it that you did. I'm not sure what I think. It made me think of clowns... ...

Hello there =], this is really pretty and the only thing I would change is spelling. "cuz" drives me nuts. =] But other than that it's really good. I might ...

First off, I would like to say that you're wording is absolutely beautiful in this piece. The way you set up each stanza and the subject matter in general is ...

Eh. This was a bit... Im not sure what. When I first read it I was expecting for it to be about a bad relationship, but you totally switched the ...

Up to the last line, this piece was really good. The material you used and the imagery really caught me and didn't let me go. But then I hit the ...